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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. v.4

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. v. 4
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have left some important papers when I checked out of your hotel about a couple of days ago. I am hoping that you would be kind enough to send those papers to my address via the postal service. I am Lucas Foster, and I stayed in room number 434 on the sixth floor of your hotel. I am assuming that I must have left the papers in one of the drawers of your TV desk in a hurry when I needed to attend an urgent meeting with some of my clients in the City Hall. The documents that I left at your hotel room are utterly important because they contain all the important terms and conditions, which I agreed upon with two of our new partners to form a new business relationship. The problem is, I can’t really remember about all those terms and conditions, so I need to get those documents back urgently. Therefore, I would like to request you to find those documents for me and mail them to me at your earliest convenience. Also, please do not forget to charge the mailing cost from my credit card that you already have on file. Yours faithfully, Lucas Foster
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
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some
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important
papers when I
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checked
out of your hotel about a couple of days ago. I am hoping that you would be kind
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enough
to
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send
those papers to my address via the postal service.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am Lucas Foster, and I stayed in room number 434 on the sixth floor of your hotel.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am assuming that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have
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left
the papers in one of the drawers of your TV desk in a hurry when I needed to attend an urgent meeting with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of my clients in the City Hall.

The documents that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
at your hotel room are
utterly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they contain all the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
terms and conditions, which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
upon with two of our new partners to form a new business relationship. The problem is, I can’t
really
remember about all those terms and conditions,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
those documents back
urgently
.

Therefore
, I would like to request you to find those documents for me and mail them to me at your earliest convenience.
Also
,
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please
do not forget to charge the mailing cost from my credit card that you already have on file.

Yours
faithfully
,

Lucas Foster
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. v. 4

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
213 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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