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You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. v.2

You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my appreciation for the meal and service that your restaurant provided us last Sunday on the occasion of my 21st birthday. Your restaurant is located near my office and I took a few friends and colleagues to celebrate my birthday based on a recommendation from one of my colleagues. We have had lunch at your establishment and it was fabulous. The experience made my birthday even special and I am quite thankful for an auspicious service and delicious menu. We were greeted properly just when we entered the eatery and surprisingly the manager himself came down to us and arranged us with an excellent place to sit in from where we enjoyed a great view. A waiter came to tantalize our taste buds explaining the details of the menu. We had the Thai soup to start with and it was served just perfectly and it smelled great. Then we opted for mackerel and fried rice which were well flavoured and had a decent portion of 4 fillets with each serving. For main we had the lamb cutlets which melted our mouth tender and came with a delightfully spiced harissa sauce. I must say that your food made our day! We absolutely took away something truly special from this visit. Thank you once again for a fantastic experience at your establishment. We can not wait until our next visit! Yours faithfully, Tom Chatfield
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my appreciation for the meal and service that your restaurant provided us last Sunday on the occasion of my 21st birthday.

Your restaurant
is located
near my office and I took a few friends and colleagues to celebrate my birthday based on a recommendation from one of my colleagues. We have had lunch at your establishment and it was fabulous. The experience made my birthday even
special and
I am quite thankful for an auspicious service and delicious menu.

We
were greeted
properly
just
when we entered the eatery and
surprisingly
the manager himself came down to us and arranged us with an excellent place to sit in from where we enjoyed a great view. A waiter came to tantalize our taste buds explaining the
details
of the menu. We had the Thai soup to
start
with and it
was served
just
perfectly
and it smelled great. Then we opted for mackerel and fried rice which were well
flavoured
and had a decent portion of 4 fillets with each serving. For
main we
had the lamb cutlets which melted our mouth tender and came with a
delightfully
spiced harissa sauce. I
must
say that your food made our day!

We
absolutely
took away something
truly
special from this visit. Thank you once again for a fantastic experience at your establishment. We can not wait until our
next
visit!

Yours
faithfully
,

Tom
Chatfield
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
240 words
6.0
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