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You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. v.1

You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to express my delight with the excellent service and high quality of food that your restaurant provided us last Sunday, on the occasion of my 30th birthday. We were a party of fifteen, which include my family, close friends and colleagues from work. Your staff went out of their way to provide seating arrangements that were easily accessible and did not interfere with other diners. I find that this is unusual in many restaurants these days. The waiters were extremely professional and polite and were obviously experienced as they did not encroach too much on the proceeding. Your current menu offers a great deal of choice, as does your wine list, and everything was available. We were very satisfied with the quality or quantity of the dishes served, and the presentation of each dish was akin to the dishes produced in shows such as 'Master Chef'. I ordered the rack or mutton ribs, which was deliciously succulent and, if anything, maybe slightly too large. Nevertheless, we managed to finish it. I was similarly impressed with the variety of local and international wines you served. The wine that was ordered arrived at the correct temperature that each wine should be consumed. The waiters were familiar with the etiquette, and the service was paramount. All in all, our group enjoyed a delicious meal at your establishment, and I had a very happy birthday. Congratulations once again. Yours faithfully, Denis Brian
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to express my delight with the excellent service and high quality of food that your restaurant provided us last Sunday, on the occasion of my 30th birthday.

We were a party of fifteen, which include my family, close friends and colleagues from work. Your staff went out of their way to provide seating arrangements that were
easily
accessible and did not interfere with other diners. I find that this is unusual in
many
restaurants these days. The waiters were
extremely
professional and polite and were
obviously
experienced as they did not encroach too much on the proceeding.

Your
current
menu offers a great deal of choice, as does your
wine
list, and everything was available. We were
very
satisfied with the quality or quantity of the dishes served, and the presentation of each dish was akin to the dishes produced in
shows
such as 'Master Chef'.

I ordered the rack or mutton ribs, which was
deliciously
succulent and, if anything, maybe
slightly
too large.
Nevertheless
, we managed to finish it. I was
similarly
impressed with the variety of local and international
wines
you served. The
wine
that
was ordered
arrived at the correct temperature that each
wine
should
be consumed
. The waiters were familiar with the etiquette, and the service was paramount.

All in all, our group enjoyed a delicious meal at your establishment, and I had a
very
happy birthday.

Congratulations once again.

Yours
faithfully
,

Denis Brian
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4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS letter You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. v. 1

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  American English
9 paragraphs
246 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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