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You missed to attend friends invite. Write a letter to your friend: apologia for not comingexplain how did you try to contact him/herwhat is the alternate plan. v.2

You missed to attend friends invite. Write a letter to your friend: apologia for not comingexplain how did you try to contact him/herwhat is the alternate plan. v. 2
Dear Ankush, I am writing to apologize for being unable to attend the wedding of your brother. Sorry, It' s taken me so long to write to you but finally I put pen to paper to explain why I was unable to show my presence on this auspicious occasion. But I was helpless as my mother was hospitalized due to kidney transplant surgery and needed my presence around her. I hope you would understand. However, I tried to reach you by phone call but it says, " Number does not exist" . Probably you have changed your contact number. I wanted to inform you by sending personal letter but due to emergency medical conditions, I was unable to do so. Now after proper rest and recovery, my mother and I, are glad to invite you and your family at our home for lunch. Moreover, she wants to meet all of you personally. Please accept our heartiest congratulations for your brother' s wedding. I hope that you would accept my sincere apology and visit us soon. I look forward to hearing from from you. Best regards, Ell
Dear
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Ankush
,

I am writing to apologize for being unable to attend the wedding of your brother.

Sorry,
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It&
#039; s taken me
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so
long to write to you
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but
finally
I put pen to paper to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
why I was unable to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
my presence on this auspicious occasion.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I was helpless as my mother
was hospitalized
due to kidney transplant surgery and needed my presence around her. I hope you would understand.

However
, I tried to reach you by phone call
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it says,
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&quot
; Number does not
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exist&quot
;
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.
Probably
you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
your contact number. I wanted to inform you by sending personal letter
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
due to emergency medical conditions, I was unable to do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
after proper rest and recovery, my mother and I, are glad to invite you and your family at our home for lunch.
Moreover
, she wants to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
all of you
personally
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
accept our heartiest congratulations
The correct preposition here is "on".
for
your
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brother&
#039; s wedding. I hope that you would accept my sincere apology and visit us
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soon
.

I look forward to hearing
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from from
you.

Best regards,

Ell
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS letter You missed to attend friends invite. Write a letter to your friend: apologia for not comingexplain how did you try to contact him/herwhat is the alternate plan. v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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