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Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartmentIntroduce yourselfDescribe problems you are facing because of thisSuggest solutions v.2

Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartmentIntroduce yourselfDescribe problems you are facing because of thisSuggest solutions v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain about an under construction site in my vicinity. My name is Mohit Ratnu, currently residing at 150ft ring road, where your new office site is running. There are several problems of which I would like to give you brief information. The construction site is running till late night, Therefore, it is arduous to sleep because of intolerance noise of construction equipment. In addition to that, a large pile of debris is placed in the center of the street by your workers. Hence, we are unable to go to other side of the street and we have to take a long route to reach there. I would like to recommend you few suggestions in order to resolve there issues. Firstly, fix the shift of workers and they should not be allowed to work after 9 o' clock at night. Secondly, either shift the debris situated in the street by using your workers or contact the debris collection service which will do this work on behalf of your company. I hope, you will take some profound actions as early as possible and reply me at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Mohit Ratnu
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about an under construction site in my vicinity.

My name is
Mohit
Ratnu
,
currently
residing at
150ft
ring road, where your new office site is running.

There are several problems of which I would like to give you brief information. The construction site is running till late night,
Therefore
, it is arduous to sleep
because
of intolerance noise of construction equipment.
In addition
to that, a large pile of debris
is placed
in the center of the street by your workers.
Hence
, we are unable to go to other side of the
street and
we
have to
take a long route to reach there.

I would like to recommend you few suggestions in order to resolve
there
issues.
Firstly
,
fix
the shift of
workers and
they should not be
allowed
to work after 9
o&
#039; clock at night.
Secondly
, either shift the debris situated in the street by using your workers or contact the debris collection service which will do this work on behalf of your
company
.

I hope, you will take
some
profound actions as early as possible and reply me at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mohit
Ratnu
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartmentIntroduce yourselfDescribe problems you are facing because of thisSuggest solutions v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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