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You have invited a friend from India to visit London on a vacation. The British High Commission in India asked your friend to submit a formal letter showing that you are ready to host your friend. Now your friend has asked you to send him/her (your friend) a letter that would assert that you have indeed invited this friend and ready to host him/her for the vacation. v.1

You have invited a friend from India to visit London on a vacation. The British High Commission in India asked your friend to submit a formal letter showing that you are ready to host your friend. Now your friend has asked you to send him/her (your friend) a letter that would assert that you have indeed invited this friend and ready to host him/her for the vacation. v. 1
Dear Amrita, Hope you and your parents are doing great. I am writing to affirm that I would be highly delighted to host you as a guest at our house for one to three months. I reaffirm that you are invited to stay in our large 5-bedroom house and dine with us during your stay. I own this house which is located in central London and have two spare rooms. I have already made plans to visit the main attractions in London and cannot wait to see you. I will receive you at the airport and while you are in London, I will take care of the expenses. I work for a local fashion house as a senior manager and my yearly salary is more than 120 thousand Pounds. My husband is a doctor and he earns significantly higher than I do. So you do not need to worry about any expense at all. You are a family member to me, not just a friend, and I am looking forward to having some quality time with you here in London. I hereby enclose my last six months’ bank statement and last year’s tax papers as references, in case you need those to submit to the embassy. Do not take long to visit us. With loves and warm wishes, Anika
Dear Amrita,

Hope you and your parents are doing great. I am writing to affirm that I would be
highly
delighted to host you as a guest at our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
for one to three months. I reaffirm that you
are invited
to stay in our large 5-bedroom
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
and dine with us during your stay.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
which
is located
in central London and have two spare rooms.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have already made plans to visit the main attractions in London and cannot wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will receive you at the airport and while you are in London, I will take care of the expenses.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
work for a local fashion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
as a senior manager and my yearly salary is more than 120 thousand Pounds. My husband is a
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
doctor and
he earns
significantly
higher than I do.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
you do not need to worry about any expense at all. You are a family member to me, not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a friend, and I am looking forward to having
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
quality time with you here in London. I hereby enclose my last six months’ bank statement and last year’s tax papers as references, in case you need those to submit to the embassy.

Do not take long to visit us.

With
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loves
and warm wishes,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Anika
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter You have invited a friend from India to visit London on a vacation. The British High Commission in India asked your friend to submit a formal letter showing that you are ready to host your friend. Now your friend has asked you to send him/her (your friend) a letter that would assert that you have indeed invited this friend and ready to host him/her for the vacation. v. 1

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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