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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another town and invite him/her to a party you are going to organise. In your letter, explain: – why are you holding the party– who are expected to be present at the party– invite your friend and give directi v.6

Write a letter to your friend who lives in another town and invite him/her to a party you are going to organise. In your letter, explain: – why are you holding the party– who are expected to be present at the party– invite your friend and give directi v. 6
Dear John, How are you and your wife? Hope both of you are enjoying as earlier! Even though it has been just two weeks since we last met, it feels like 2 months. I am writing to you to invite both of you to attend the 50th anniversary of our grandparents. As it is such an auspicious event for our family, we are going to celebrate it in the “town hall” on 28th June 2019. We have invited almost all our near and dear ones, especially the District Councillor who will be the surprise guest for our grandparents. Town hall is situated at the outer ring-road of our town. After reaching airport of our city, take the first left towards the city zoo. Then, make a right turn towards the science museum, and at the you will reach outer-ring road. Drive for 2 more kilometers and you will see “town hall”. Kindly block your calendar for this special day. Hope to see you in the event. Best regards, Bibhu
Dear John,

How are you and your wife? Hope both of you are enjoying as earlier!
Even though
it has been
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
two weeks since we last met, it feels like 2 months. I am writing to you to invite both of you to attend the 50th anniversary of our grandparents. As it is such an auspicious
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
for our family, we are going to celebrate it in the “town hall” on 28th June 2019.

We have invited almost all our near and dear ones,
especially
the District Councillor who will be the surprise guest for our grandparents.

Town hall
is situated
at the outer ring-road of our town. After reaching airport of our city, take the
first
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
towards the city zoo. Then,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a right turn towards the science museum, and at
Possible typo. Did you mean "the" or "you"?
the you
will reach outer-ring road. Drive for 2 more kilometers and you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
“town hall”.

Kindly block your calendar for this special day. Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
.

Best regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Bibhu
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who lives in another town and invite him/her to a party you are going to organise. In your letter, explain: – why are you holding the party– who are expected to be present at the party– invite your friend and give directi v. 6

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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