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You have invited a friend from India to visit London on a vacation. The British High Commission in India asked your friend to submit a formal letter showing that you are ready to host your friend. Now your friend has asked you to send him/her (your friend) a letter that would assert that you have indeed invited this friend and ready to host him/her for the vacation. v. 2

Dear Antonio, It was so exciting to read your letter, especially your adventure in a distant village in Italy which I would never dare to attempt. However, I am writing today to assert that I will be happy to host you at my house during your visit to the UK. As I have already stated in one of my previous letters to you, I am eagerly waiting for your arrival in London. I already have many plans and I cannot wait to receive you at the airport. I am a software engineer in a large company in London and my wife is a lecturer at a college. We are financially solvent and own a large apartment in the city centre. We have two spare rooms that can accommodate 2-3 guests and are currently vacant. I have not met you for more than 5 years and this was mostly because of your tight schedule. I wish our time together in London would take back us to our college days which were magical. I wonder how time does fly! Do hurry to meet me as I cannot wait any longer to have you with us. Warm wishes, Sazal.

IELTS letter You have invited a friend from India to visit London on a vacation. The British High Commission in India asked your friend to submit a formal letter showing that you are ready to host your friend. Now your friend has asked you to send him/her (your friend) a letter that would assert that you have indeed invited this friend and ready to host him/her for the vacation. v.2

Dear Antonio, It was
so
exciting to read your letter,
especially
your adventure in a distant village in Italy which I would never dare to attempt.
However
, I am writing
today
to assert that I will be happy to host you at my
house
during your visit to the UK. As I have already stated in one of my previous letters to you, I am
eagerly
waiting for your arrival in London. I already have
many
plans and I cannot wait to receive you at the airport. I am a software engineer in a large
company
in London and my wife is a lecturer at a college. We are
financially
solvent and
own
a large apartment in the city
centre
. We have two spare rooms that can accommodate 2-3 guests and are
currently
vacant. I have not met you for more than 5 years and this was
mostly
because
of your tight schedule. I wish our time together in London would take back us to our college days which were magical.
I
wonder how time does
fly
! Do hurry to
meet
me as I cannot wait any longer to have you with us. Warm wishes,
Sazal
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
Letter
7 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≥ 7
  • Band score ≤ 6
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