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You have invited a friend from India to visit London on a vacation. The British High Commission in India asked your friend to submit a formal letter showing that you are ready to host your friend. Now your friend has asked you to send him/her (your friend) a letter that would assert that you have indeed invited this friend and ready to host him/her for the vacation. v.2

You have invited a friend from India to visit London on a vacation. The British High Commission in India asked your friend to submit a formal letter showing that you are ready to host your friend. Now your friend has asked you to send him/her (your friend) a letter that would assert that you have indeed invited this friend and ready to host him/her for the vacation. v. 2
Dear Antonio, It was so exciting to read your letter, especially your adventure in a distant village in Italy which I would never dare to attempt. However, I am writing today to assert that I will be happy to host you at my house during your visit to the UK. As I have already stated in one of my previous letters to you, I am eagerly waiting for your arrival in London. I already have many plans and I cannot wait to receive you at the airport. I am a software engineer in a large company in London and my wife is a lecturer at a college. We are financially solvent and own a large apartment in the city centre. We have two spare rooms that can accommodate 2-3 guests and are currently vacant. I have not met you for more than 5 years and this was mostly because of your tight schedule. I wish our time together in London would take back us to our college days which were magical. I wonder how time does fly! Do hurry to meet me as I cannot wait any longer to have you with us. Warm wishes, Sazal.
Dear Antonio,

It was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
exciting to read your letter,
especially
your adventure in a distant village in Italy which I would never dare to attempt.
However
, I am writing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
to assert that I will be happy to host you at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
during your visit to the UK.

As I have already stated in one of my previous letters to you, I am
eagerly
waiting for your arrival in London. I already have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
plans and I cannot wait to receive you at the airport. I am a software engineer in a large
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in London and my wife is a lecturer at a college. We are
financially
solvent and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
a large apartment in the city
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
. We have two spare rooms that can accommodate 2-3 guests and are
currently
vacant.

I have not met you for more than 5 years and this was
mostly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of your tight schedule. I wish our time together in London would take back us to our college days which were magical.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
wonder how time does
fly
!

Do hurry to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
me as I cannot wait any longer to have you with us.

Warm wishes,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Sazal
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You have invited a friend from India to visit London on a vacation. The British High Commission in India asked your friend to submit a formal letter showing that you are ready to host your friend. Now your friend has asked you to send him/her (your friend) a letter that would assert that you have indeed invited this friend and ready to host him/her for the vacation. v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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