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You missed an appointment. Write a letter explaining what happened. In your letter include: what the appointment wasa apology for missing the appointmenta request to reschedule v.2

You missed an appointment. Write a letter explaining what happened. In your letter include: what the appointment wasa apology for missing the appointmenta request to reschedule v. 2
Dear Madam, I like to apologize for missing my dental cleaning appointment at 11 am on Monday, 4th of July. Please allow me to explain the reasons for not showing up for my appointment. As you remember, I have a 4 year old daughter named Sara, who just started attending preschool. On the day of the appointment, I dropped her off to her preschool and was en-route for my dental cleaning appointment. On my way, I got a call from one of the teachers from the preschool to tell me that Sara had just slipped during their play-time and had started bleeding from her nose. I immediately went back to the preschool to take her to the hospital so that she gets immediate medical attention. Due to all this, I was also unable to call your receptionist to cancel my appointment and try to reschedule it. I am extremely sorry to keep you waiting your precious time. But, I had to take care of my daughter and hence could not show up on my appointment time. I hope you understand my situation as a fellow parent and forgive me. I would like to reschedule our appointment to another day whenever you are free during the next week. Yours Sincerely, Nitin
Dear Madam,

I like to apologize for missing my dental cleaning
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appointment
at 11 am on Monday, 4th of July.
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Please
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allow
me to
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explain
the reasons for not showing up for my appointment.

As you remember, I have a 4 year
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old
daughter named Sara, who
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just
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started
attending
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preschool
. On the day of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appointment
, I dropped her off to her
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
preschool
and was en-route for my dental cleaning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appointment
. On my way, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a call from one of the teachers from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
preschool
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
me that Sara had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
slipped during their play-time and had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
bleeding from her nose. I immediately went back to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
preschool
to take her to the hospital
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
immediate medical attention. Due to all this, I was
also
unable to call your receptionist to cancel my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appointment
and try to reschedule it. I am
extremely
sorry to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
you waiting your precious time.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, I had to take care of my daughter and
hence
could not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
up on my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appointment
time.

I hope you understand my situation as a fellow parent and forgive me. I would like to reschedule our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appointment
to another day whenever you are free during the
next
week.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Nitin
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter You missed an appointment. Write a letter explaining what happened. In your letter include: what the appointment wasa apology for missing the appointmenta request to reschedule v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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