Hi Flora
I am good and hope that you are also sailing on the same boat. I received your epistle and you want me to babysit your daughter this Saturday. But, sorry to say that I will not be available this weekend.
Last Thursday, I met one of my childhood friends, Mary. She is getting married and invited me on her wedding. I already promised her to attend her wedding on coming Saturday. I am leaving for Sydney this Friday for her marriage. It will not be possible for me to attend Lisa this time. You already know that I love spending time with Lisa and she also stays with me happily.
Next weekend, I am totally free. If, you do not have any urgent work and it is possible for you to postpone it till next weekend then I will definitely babysit your daughter. You asked me about charges so normally, my fee is ten dollars per hour but from you I will take just 5 dollars per hour. You should also write me about the food and activities which Lisa likes.
Hope that you understand my situation. I am waiting for your response and give my love to your daughter.
Yours truly
Malisa
Hi Flora
I am
good
and hope that you are
also
sailing on the same boat. I received your epistle and you want me to babysit your daughter this Saturday.
But
, sorry to say that I will not be available this weekend.
Last Thursday, I met one of my childhood friends, Mary. She is getting married and invited me on her wedding. I already promised her to attend her wedding on coming Saturday. I am leaving for Sydney this Friday for her marriage. It will not be possible for me to attend Lisa this time. You already know that I
love
spending time with
Lisa and
she
also
stays with me
happily
.
Next
weekend, I am
totally
free. If, you do not have any urgent work and it is possible for you to postpone it till
next
weekend then I will definitely babysit your daughter. You asked me about charges
so
normally
, my fee is ten dollars per hour
but
from
you
I will take
just
5 dollars per hour. You should
also
write me about the food and activities which Lisa likes.
Hope that you understand my situation. I am waiting for your response and give my
love
to your daughter.
Yours
truly
Malisa
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