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You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology. In your letter, you should: apology to your friendexplain why you couldn’t attend the partysay what steps you will take to avoid in future. v.2

You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology. In your letter, you should: apology to your friendexplain why you couldn’t attend the partysay what steps you will take to avoid in future. v. 2
Dear Preetam, I am writing this letter because I am not attending to your birthday party unfortunatily, I got emergency call my home town. I have shocked that new because my grandfather admitted in hospital for the reason heart attack, so I am not attending to you this party occasion, In my absence you enjoy the party with your family and other friends. I am so sorry that I missed your party, I am already special plan your bithday and purchased unique gift for you but the last moment emergency come and change my mind. I am really sorry I not inform you, I saw the picture facebook, instagram and video you looking nice on your birthday. I would like inform you my grandfather he is recovered and back to home. during days I was very busy in hospital. Hope you understand this situation. I promise to you not again repeat in future if any problem this similar situation again I will inform you. Your, s sincerly amit mishra
Dear
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Preetam
,

I am writing this letter
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because
I am not attending to your birthday
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party
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unfortunatily
, I
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got
emergency call my home town. I have shocked that new
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because
my grandfather admitted in hospital for the reason heart attack,
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so
I am not attending to you this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
occasion, In my absence you enjoy the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
with your family and other friends.
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I
am
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so
sorry that I missed your
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party
, I am already special plan your
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bithday
and
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purchased
unique gift for you
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but
the last moment emergency
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come
and
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change
my mind.
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I
am
really
sorry I not inform you, I
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saw
the picture
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facebook
,
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instagram
and video
Did you mean "you're looking", "you are looking", or "you were looking"?
you looking
nice on your birthday.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like inform you my grandfather he
is recovered
and back to home.
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during
The comma is probably missing here: "days, I".
days I
was
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very
busy in hospital.

Hope you understand this situation. I promise to you not again repeat in future if any problem this similar situation again I will inform you.

Your, s
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sincerly


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amit
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mishra
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes

IELTS letter You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology. In your letter, you should: apology to your friendexplain why you couldn’t attend the partysay what steps you will take to avoid in future. v. 2

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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