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You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology. In your letter, you should: apology to your friendexplain why you couldn’t attend the partysay what steps you will take to avoid in future. v.2

You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology. In your letter, you should: apology to your friendexplain why you couldn’t attend the partysay what steps you will take to avoid in future. v. 2
Dear Preetam, I am writing this letter because I am not attending to your birthday party unfortunatily, I got emergency call my home town. I have shocked that new because my grandfather admitted in hospital for the reason heart attack, so I am not attending to you this party occasion, In my absence you enjoy the party with your family and other friends. I am so sorry that I missed your party, I am already special plan your bithday and purchased unique gift for you but the last moment emergency come and change my mind. I am really sorry I not inform you, I saw the picture facebook, instagram and video you looking nice on your birthday. I would like inform you my grandfather he is recovered and back to home. during days I was very busy in hospital. Hope you understand this situation. I promise to you not again repeat in future if any problem this similar situation again I will inform you. Your, s sincerly amit mishra
Dear
Preetam
,

I am writing this letter
because
I am not attending to your birthday
party
unfortunatily
, I
got
emergency call my home town. I have shocked that new
because
my grandfather admitted in hospital for the reason heart attack,
so
I am not attending to you this
party
occasion, In my absence you enjoy the
party
with your family and other friends.
I
am
so
sorry that I missed your
party
, I am already special plan your
bithday
and
purchased
unique gift for you
but
the last moment emergency
come
and
change
my mind.
I
am
really
sorry I not inform you, I
saw
the picture
facebook
,
instagram
and video
you looking
nice on your birthday.
I
would like inform you my grandfather he
is recovered
and back to home.
during
days I
was
very
busy in hospital.

Hope you understand this situation. I promise to you not again repeat in future if any problem this similar situation again I will inform you.

Your, s
sincerly


amit
mishra
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes
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Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS letter You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology. In your letter, you should: apology to your friendexplain why you couldn’t attend the partysay what steps you will take to avoid in future. v. 2

Letter
5 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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