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You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo v.2

You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this to express my interest to participate as an active volunteer to serve in Tanzania next month. As my semester is getting over by this month, I will spend most of my time free next month. Therefore, I decided to involve in any volunteering activity in any African country. Another reason why I am keen to do this is, it is one of my childhood ambitions to help the needy. Since currently I study English Literature at the University of Glasgow with two years of prior experience in English teaching in Kent, UK, I would like to apply my skills in the form of free English lessons for young children in Tanzania, which is an underdeveloped country. Moreover, I decided to provide English coaching in a primary school in the city centre in Dodoma. I would be grateful if you could arrange my trip that lasts for two months through your company, Cultural Expeditions, so that I can provide complete English training that is beneficial to the children. I am looking forward to hear from you at your earliest convenience. Thanking you, Yours sincerely, Krrish
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this to express my interest to participate as an active volunteer to serve in Tanzania
next
month.

As my semester is getting over by this month, I will spend most of my time free
next
month.
Therefore
, I decided to involve in any volunteering activity in any African country. Another reason why I am keen to do this is, it is one of my childhood ambitions to
help
the needy.

Since
currently
I study English Literature at the University of Glasgow with two years of prior experience in English teaching in Kent, UK, I would like to apply my
skills
in the form of free English lessons for young children in Tanzania, which is an underdeveloped country.

Moreover
, I decided to provide English coaching in a primary school in the city
centre
in Dodoma. I would be grateful if you could arrange my trip that lasts for two months through your
company
, Cultural Expeditions,
so
that I can provide complete English training
that is
beneficial to the children.

I am looking forward
to hear
from you at your earliest convenience.

Thanking you,

Yours
sincerely
,

Krrish
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo v. 2

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