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You had just missed a friend’s party, white a letter apologizing and stating reasons why you could not attend the party. ask how fun was it v.2

You had just missed a friend’s party, white a letter apologizing and stating reasons why you could not attend the party. ask how fun was it v. 2
Dear Anna, I’m overwhelmed to know that you get your soul mate. I know that your engagement party was one of the most important events of your life and you could understand that how much it was painful and depressing for me to not join. I was extremely excited to attend your party, selected a fabulous evening gown too with matching red stilettos and accessories. But as you know, my office life is really busy these days, working with foreign client on a project to streamline their management reporting and regulatory accounts. They could not convert the project into the process and had technical issues. My boss wanted me to leave on the next flight to smooth out the streaming issue. I hope you will forgive me. Anyway, I am dying to know every detail of the party down to each minute. I want you to send me loads of pictures, especially you and the groom with all of your friends and family. I hope to hear from you ASAP. Don’t forget to send snaps on my email ID. Best wishes, SAIRA
Dear Anna,

I’m overwhelmed to
know
that you
get
your soul mate. I
know
that your engagement party was one of the most
important
events
of your life and you could understand that how much it was painful and depressing for me to not
join
.

I
was
extremely
excited to attend your party, selected a fabulous evening gown too with matching red stilettos and accessories.
But
as you
know
, my office life is
really
busy these days, working with foreign client on a project to streamline their management reporting and regulatory accounts. They could not convert the project into the process and had technical issues. My boss wanted me to
leave
on the
next
flight to smooth out the streaming issue. I hope you will forgive me.

Anyway, I am dying to
know
every detail of the party down to each minute. I want you to
send
me loads of pictures,
especially
you and the groom with all of your friends and family.

I hope to hear from you ASAP. Don’t forget to
send
snaps on my email ID.

Best wishes,

SAIRA
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You had just missed a friend’s party, white a letter apologizing and stating reasons why you could not attend the party. ask how fun was it v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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