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Write a letter to the hospital. In your letterexplain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would be able to dogive details of when you would be available for this workYou should write at least 150 words v.2

Write a letter to the hospital. In your letterexplain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would be able to dogive details of when you would be available for this workv. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, Undersign is MBA student in the " City College of Business" , which is situated 3 kms from your hospital. As per the college curriculum, I need to write an assignment on administrative management, and from the college website I have come know that there is a requirement in administrative department on temporary basis in your hospital. As I have good analytical skills and proficient in excel, I am a good candidate for the post as per job description. It is my humble request to shortlist me for the post if my skills are suitable for the post. Moreover, I have no issue if there is no pay for my work. In fact, this job would help me in two ways: to get proper exposure for my assignment, and to get an experience prior to my full time job offer. My third term will be over by end of this month, and from the 1st day of the next month I will be available job this temporary job. Kindly look into my candidature request, and will be waiting eagerly for your response. Yours faithfully, Bibhu Kalita
Dear Sir or Madam,

Undersign is MBA student in the
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from your hospital. As per the college curriculum, I need to write an assignment on administrative management, and from the college website I have
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come
know that there is a requirement in administrative department on temporary basis in your hospital.

As I have
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good
analytical
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skills
and proficient in excel, I am a
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good
candidate for the post as per
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job
description. It is my humble request to shortlist me for the post if my
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skills
are suitable for the post.
Moreover
, I have no issue if there is no pay for my work. In fact, this
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job
would
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help
me in two ways: to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
proper exposure for my assignment, and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an experience prior to my full time
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
offer.

My third term will be over by
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end
of this month, and from the 1st day of the
next
month I will be available
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
this temporary job.

Kindly look into my candidature request, and will be waiting
eagerly
for your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

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IELTS letter Write a letter to the hospital. In your letterexplain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would be able to dogive details of when you would be available for this workv. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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