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Write a letter to a company manager about a problem in a online purchased itemdescribe the itemwhat it the issuewhat you expect the manager to do v.1

Write a letter to a company manager about a problem in a online purchased itemdescribe the itemwhat it the issuewhat you expect the manager to do v. 1
Dear Madam/Sir, I am writing to complain about an item which I bought online from your website. The purchase was made on the 13th of September, Receipt Number is LO86F09. Your company is incredibly credible about the quality of products they keep, great customer service and at the door delivery in the shortest period of time. However, recently I ordered an exclusive gown for my sister as her wedding gift. Which was delivered yesterday, upon opening, I was gob-smacked. The item totally did not match the description, quality is extremely cheap, colors are nasty, and the belt is missing. As dress description differs and secondly, it does not worth an enormous amount of money I paid, I want to either replace it with shoes and some accessories I have chosen, or I want you to return my money back. I hope to hear from you ASAP, if you need any more information, you can contact me on my mobile number. Yours faithfully, SAIRA
Dear Madam/Sir,

I am writing to complain about an item which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
online from your website. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
was made
on the 13th of September, Receipt Number is LO86F09.

Your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
is
incredibly
credible about the quality of products they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
, great customer service and at the door delivery in the shortest period of time.
However
, recently I ordered an exclusive gown for my sister as her wedding gift. Which
was delivered
yesterday, upon opening, I was gob-smacked. The item
totally
did not match the description, quality is
extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
, colors are nasty, and the belt is missing.

As dress description differs and
secondly
, it does not worth an enormous amount of money I paid, I want to either replace it with shoes and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
accessories I have chosen, or I want you to return my money back.

I hope to hear from you ASAP, if you need any more information, you can contact me on my mobile number.

Yours
faithfully
,

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SAIRA
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a company manager about a problem in a online purchased itemdescribe the itemwhat it the issuewhat you expect the manager to do v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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