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You recently completed a course and you borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn t return in time You would like to return the book now Write a letter to your teacher and say What book was it How helpful was the book Explain why you couldn t ret v.2

You recently completed a course and you borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn t return in time You would like to return the book now Write a letter to your teacher and say What book was it How helpful was the book Explain why you couldn t ret v. 2
Dear Mrs. Perriz, I am writing this letter to apologize to you for not returning the book that I borrowed from you for my graduation exam last month on time. The book is titled ' Practical English Usage' by Michael Darwin. It was the latest edition of 2019. Its cover is purple, and it has almost over 500 pages. This book contains a thorough explanation of every basic concept of English grammar. It has not only clarified my doubts but also has reduced the number of mistakes I used to make earlier. I was able to achieve an A+ grade in my recent exam with its help. After my exams were over, I went to Canada along with my family on a one-month vacation. Hence, I was unable to return your book. As I have returned to India, I shall visit college the following Monday and return the book to you. I am grateful for the support provided to me throughout. Yours sincerely, Hannah Montana
Dear Mrs.
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Perriz
,

I am writing this letter to apologize to you for not returning the
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book
that I borrowed from you for my graduation exam last month on time.

The
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book
is titled
' Practical English
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#039; by Michael Darwin. It was the latest edition of 2019. Its cover is purple, and it has almost over 500 pages.

This
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book
contains a thorough explanation of every basic concept of English grammar. It has not
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only
clarified my doubts
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but
also
has
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reduced
the number of mistakes I
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used
to
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make
earlier. I was able to achieve an A+ grade in my recent exam with its
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help
.

After my exams were over, I went to Canada along with my family on a one-month vacation.
Hence
, I was unable to return your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
. As I have returned to India, I shall visit college the following Monday and return the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
to you.

I am grateful for the support provided to me throughout.

Yours
sincerely
,

Hannah Montana
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You recently completed a course and you borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn t return in time You would like to return the book now Write a letter to your teacher and say What book was it How helpful was the book Explain why you couldn t ret v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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