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You have been doing some voluntary work to help local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In Your letter- Describe the work you have been doing- E v.1

You have been doing some voluntary work to help local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In Your letter- Describe the work you have been doing- E v. 1
Dear Ray, I am writing this in reference to my the teaching activity which I am currently doing with ' Robin Hood Academy' in one of the cluster in church street as a volunteer to teach under-privileged children in the slum. I have enjoyed working with the team at the slum however, I would not be able to continue from next week due to my upcoming final exams, next month. As I am in my last year of MBA, I need to focus on my exams and placements. I would really love to come back, post my graduation and would love to volunteer again over weekends. I have covered fifty percent of the school syllabus for the children and leaving them in between would not be correct. Hence, I spoke to my brother ' Chahat' and he has agreed to support this noble cause for next two months. Kindly accept my apology for discontinuing in between. Thank You for all the extended support during my volunteering tenure. Yours sincerely Mohit
Dear Ray,

I am writing this in reference to my the teaching activity which I am
currently
doing with ' Robin Hood
Academy&
#039; in one of the cluster in church street as a volunteer to teach under-privileged children in the slum.

I have enjoyed working with the team at the slum
however
, I would not be able to continue from
next
week due to my upcoming final exams,
next
month. As I am in my last year of MBA, I need to focus on my exams and placements. I would
really
love
to
come
back, post my graduation and would
love
to volunteer again over weekends.

I have covered fifty percent of the school syllabus for the children and leaving them in between would not be correct.
Hence
, I spoke to my brother '
Chahat&
#039; and he has
agreed
to support this noble cause for
next
two months. Kindly accept my apology for discontinuing in between.

Thank You for all the extended support during my volunteering tenure.

Yours
sincerely


Mohit
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You have been doing some voluntary work to help local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In Your letter- Describe the work you have been doing- E v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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