Dear Ray,
I am writing this in reference to my the teaching activity which I am currently doing with ' Robin Hood Academy' in one of the cluster in church street as a volunteer to teach under-privileged children in the slum.
I have enjoyed working with the team at the slum however, I would not be able to continue from next week due to my upcoming final exams, next month. As I am in my last year of MBA, I need to focus on my exams and placements. I would really love to come back, post my graduation and would love to volunteer again over weekends.
I have covered fifty percent of the school syllabus for the children and leaving them in between would not be correct. Hence, I spoke to my brother ' Chahat' and he has agreed to support this noble cause for next two months. Kindly accept my apology for discontinuing in between.
Thank You for all the extended support during my volunteering tenure.
Yours sincerely
Mohit
Dear Ray,
I am writing this in reference to my the teaching activity which I am
currently
doing with ' Robin Hood
Academy&
#039; in one of the cluster in church street as a volunteer to teach under-privileged children in the slum.
I have enjoyed working with the team at the slum
however
, I would not be able to continue from
next
week due to my upcoming final exams,
next
month. As I am in my last year of MBA, I need to focus on my exams and placements. I would
really
love
to
come
back, post my graduation and would
love
to volunteer again over weekends.
I have covered fifty percent of the school syllabus for the children and leaving them in between would not be correct.
Hence
, I spoke to my brother '
Chahat&
#039; and he has
agreed
to support this noble cause for
next
two months. Kindly accept my apology for discontinuing in between.
Thank You for all the extended support during my volunteering tenure.
Yours
sincerely
Mohit
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