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You live in a rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: - explain what caused the damage - why do you need them to fix the problem right away? - what needs to be d v.2

You live in a rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: - explain what caused the damage - why do you need them to fix the problem right away? - what needs to be d v. 2
Dear Mr Albert, I am Rebecca Paula, a tenant at your Park view Residence, writing to let you know that last night' s storm broke a couple of windows at my apartment and those need to be fixed immediately. I reside at the flat 4B2 on the eighth floor with my family for the last one and a half years. The relentless storm and a heavy downpour last night damaged many dwellings in our area and it is unfortunate that a couple of windows in my apartment has been shattered. The electricity line is disrupting since then and the continuous chill wind is freely flowing in my apartment. This has become unbearable, especially for my mother-in-law and six years old daughter. I want you to send someone to inspect how bad the broken windows are and how challenging it is to stay inside the flat. Please replace the windows as quickly as possible. You can contact a local vendor who provides such repair works. I will assist you in whichever way possible. Yours sincerely, Rebecca Paula
Dear Mr Albert,

I am Rebecca Paula, a tenant at your Park view Residence, writing to
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#039; s storm broke a couple of windows at my apartment and those need to be
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fixed
immediately.

I reside at the flat 4B2 on the eighth floor with my family for the last one and a half years. The relentless storm and a heavy downpour last night damaged
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many
dwellings in our area and it is unfortunate that a couple of windows in my apartment has
been shattered
. The electricity line is disrupting since then and the continuous chill wind is
freely
flowing in my apartment. This has become unbearable,
especially
for my mother-in-law and six years
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old
daughter.

I want you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
someone to inspect how
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bad
the broken windows are and how challenging it is to stay inside the flat.
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Please
replace the windows as
quickly
as possible. You can contact a local vendor who provides such repair works. I will assist you in whichever way possible.

Yours
sincerely
,

Rebecca Paula
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS letter You live in a rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: - explain what caused the damage - why do you need them to fix the problem right away? - what needs to be d v. 2

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  American English
6 paragraphs
175 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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