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You live in a rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: - explain what caused the damage - why do you need them to fix the problem right away? - what needs to be d v.2

You live in a rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: - explain what caused the damage - why do you need them to fix the problem right away? - what needs to be d v. 2

Dear Mr Albert, I am Rebecca Paula, a tenant at your Park view Residence, writing to let you know that last night' s storm broke a couple of windows at my apartment and those need to be fixed immediately. I reside at the flat 4B2 on the eighth floor with my family for the last one and a half years. The relentless storm and a heavy downpour last night damaged many dwellings in our area and it is unfortunate that a couple of windows in my apartment has been shattered. The electricity line is disrupting since then and the continuous chill wind is freely flowing in my apartment. This has become unbearable, especially for my mother-in-law and six years old daughter. I want you to send someone to inspect how bad the broken windows are and how challenging it is to stay inside the flat. Please replace the windows as quickly as possible. You can contact a local vendor who provides such repair works. I will assist you in whichever way possible. Yours sincerely, Rebecca Paula

Dear Mr Albert,

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fixed
 immediately.

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many
 dwellings in our area and it is unfortunate that a couple of windows in my apartment has been shattered
. The electricity line is disrupting since then and the continuous chill wind is freely
 flowing in my apartment. This has become unbearable, especially
 for my mother-in-law and six years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 daughter.

I want you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 someone to inspect how This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 the broken windows are and how challenging it is to stay inside the flat. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 replace the windows as quickly
 as possible. You can contact a local vendor who provides such repair works. I will assist you in whichever way possible.

Yours sincerely
,

Rebecca Paula

1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter You live in a rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: - explain what caused the damage - why do you need them to fix the problem right away? - what needs to be d v. 2

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

175 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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