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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighour. In your letter-Introduce your self-Describe your plans for the party-Invite your neighbour to c v.5

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighour. In your letter-Introduce your self-Describe your plans for the party-Invite your neighbour to c v. 5
Dear John, Hello. This is Darby who is living opposite your house. I met you when I moved this house two months ago. Thus, I am pretty sure that you can recall me. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am going to have a party next Sunday, 24th of July from 8pm. My birthday is 28th of July. That is why I am planning to hold a party at that time. I think it should be very noise because it would be crowed. My girlfriend, parents, friends and also my girlfriend’s friends are invited at my big party. The party will be in full swing until late night. I am a little concerned that you will be uncomfortable or not be able to sleep well, so please come and join the party. Let’s enjoy the party together! Additionally, I would like to you tell something more. The dress code will be red. Do not hesitate and afraid to come to the party. It will be amazing and fantastic a party that you have ever experienced. I really look forward to seeing you at the party. Yours sincerely, Darby.
Dear John,

Hello. This is Darby who is living opposite your
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house
. I met you when I
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moved
this
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house
two months ago.
Thus
, I am pretty sure that you can recall me. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am going to have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
next
Sunday, 24th of July from 8pm.

My birthday is 28th of July.
That is
why I am planning to hold a
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party
at that time. I
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think
it should be
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very
noise
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because
it would
be crowed
. My girlfriend, parents, friends and
also
my girlfriend’s friends
are invited
at my
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big
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party
. The
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party
will be in full swing until late night.

I am a
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little
concerned that you will be uncomfortable or not be able to sleep well,
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so
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please
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come
and
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join
the
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party
.
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Let
’s enjoy the
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party
together!
Additionally
, I would like to you
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tell
something more. The dress code will
be red
.

Do not hesitate and afraid to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
. It will be amazing and fantastic a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
that you have ever experienced. I
really
look forward to seeing you at the party.

Yours
sincerely
,

Darby.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighour. In your letter-Introduce your self-Describe your plans for the party-Invite your neighbour to c v. 5

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
192 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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