Dear John,
As you know, I have been going through a difficult divorce with my spouse for almost a year and it has had an adverse influence on my mood and even overall physical well-being. So, traveling abroad appears to be a right thing to do to switch my attention from problems to positive prospects. In addition, I have an idea to start a new business with a Chinese firm and visiting the state provides me with an indispensable opportunity to meet face-to-face with my partners.
I would like you join me because of your knowledge of Chinese language. Although it is possible to find a good translator in China, I cannot trust blindly to a person whom I don’t know well. Moreover, you have not had a holiday for almost five years by now and having some rest and fun overseas will surely have an advantageous impact on you. I promise the majority of our time would be devoted to a variety of local entertainment.
I plan to arrive at Beijing airport on 2nd March 2017. It will be a Friday evening; so, there will be a plethora of time to acclimatize and adapt to a novel time zone as well as overcome a jet lag. I intend to spend four days in the megalopolis and three days on visiting such places as the Great Wall of China that are situated outside the city. I will not go into details because I assume you are well-aware of the local landmarks and attractions.
Hope you’ll accept my invitation.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk.
Dear John,
As you know, I have been going through a difficult divorce with my spouse for almost a year and it has had an adverse influence on my mood and even
overall
physical well-being.
So
, traveling abroad appears to be a right thing to do to switch my attention from problems to
positive
prospects.
In addition
, I have an
idea
to
start
a new business with a Chinese firm and visiting the state provides me with an indispensable opportunity to
meet
face-to-face with my partners.
I would like you
join
me
because
of your knowledge of Chinese language. Although it is possible to find a
good
translator in China, I cannot trust
blindly
to a person whom I don’t know well.
Moreover
, you have not had a holiday for almost five years by
now
and having
some
rest and fun overseas will
surely
have an advantageous impact on you. I promise the majority of our time would
be devoted
to a variety of local entertainment.
I plan to arrive at Beijing airport on 2nd March 2017. It will be a Friday evening;
so
, there will be a plethora of time to acclimatize and adapt to a novel time zone
as well
as overcome a jet lag. I intend to spend four days in the megalopolis and three days on visiting such places as the Great Wall of China that
are situated
outside the city. I will not go into
details
because
I assume you are well-aware of the local landmarks and attractions.
Hope you’ll accept my invitation.
Sincerely
yours,
Eugene
Dubinchuk
.
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