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You have recently taken a two-day course. Write to give your feedback to the course organiser and say-Give details of the course-What did you like or dislike about it-suggest some improvements to the course. v.2

You have recently taken a two-day course. Write to give your feedback to the course organiser and say-Give details of the course-What did you like or dislike about it-suggest some improvements to the course. v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to give my feedback on the short course which was specially arranged for managers at the Hotel President on “Coaching” from 11th August for 2 days. I and many of other attendees are jubilant with the course because of its contemporary content which is vital to understand for all managers. Moreover, the coach of this program was very intelligent person. The way he opted for presentation was well appreciable and owing to that we have cleared our all doubts. Additionally, I would like to give valuable suggestions which would help you to plan such programs in better way. Although, all facilities and amenities at hotel were good, the food was very oily and spicy and due to which many of candidates felt uncomfortable after lunch. Furthermore, a venue was quiet away from city which was biggest hurdle for some attendees who came from outside to reach at destination. You should choose venue which is centrally located. One again thank you so much for such informative course and I am sure my feedback and suggestions matter a lot to you. Yours faithfully, Smith John
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to give my feedback on the short course which was
specially
arranged for managers at the Hotel President on “Coaching” from 11th August for 2 days.

I and
many
of other attendees are jubilant with the course
because
of its contemporary content which is vital to understand for all managers.
Moreover
, the coach of this program was
very
intelligent person. The way he opted for presentation was well appreciable and owing to that we have cleared our all doubts.

Additionally
, I would like to give valuable suggestions which would
help
you to plan such programs in better way. Although, all facilities and amenities at hotel were
good
, the food was
very
oily and spicy and due to which
many
of candidates felt uncomfortable after lunch.
Furthermore
, a venue was quiet away from city which was
biggest
hurdle for
some
attendees who came from outside to reach at destination. You should choose venue which is
centrally
located.

One again thank you
so
much for such informative
course and
I am sure my feedback and suggestions matter a lot to you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Smith John
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You have recently taken a two-day course. Write to give your feedback to the course organiser and say-Give details of the course-What did you like or dislike about it-suggest some improvements to the course. v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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