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you have spent you last weekend with your friend and has lost watch write a letter to you friend 1 Thanking him her for last weekend 2 describe your watch 3 What will he she do with it v.2

you have spent you last weekend with your friend and has lost watch write a letter to you friend 1 Thanking him her for last weekend 2 describe your watch 3 What will he she do with it v. 2
ear Kinnari, It was a great pleasure for me to be with you last weekend. I appreciate your effort for making holiday unforgetable, we spent together and had lots of fun in the course. I also admire for inviting me to stay at your place. However, I' m writing this to inform about my watch which has been lost. I noticed the similar type of wristwatch in Swati' s hand as well; therefore, I' m giving you the exact description. it is analog watch with circular in shape and silver in colour with white dial and having only hour and minute niddles. Manufacturer is Ted baker. That ticker seems to be lucky for me hence, if you find watch anywhere at your house, I request you to send it via post to my office address. I have an important meeting scheduled for next week and I can' t take risk of encountering my boss without my lucky watch. Please prefer speed post of Blue Dart. Mailing address is as follows: #36, Wilson Street, Vancover, Canada 123 Looking forward to seeing you Soon! ! With love Dharani
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ear
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Kinnari
,

It was a great pleasure for me to be with you last weekend. I appreciate your effort for making holiday
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unforgetable
, we spent together and had lots of fun in the course. I
also
admire for inviting me to stay at your place.
However
,
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I&
#039; m writing this to inform about my
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watch
which has
been lost
.

I noticed the similar type of wristwatch in
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Swati&
#039; s hand
as well
;
therefore
,
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I&
#039; m giving you the exact description.
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it
is analog
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watch
with
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circular in shape
and
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silver in colour
with white dial and having
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only
hour and minute
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niddles
. Manufacturer
is Ted
baker.

That ticker seems to be lucky for me
hence
, if you find
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watch
anywhere at your
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house
, I request you to
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send
it via post to my office address. I have an
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important
meeting scheduled for
next
week and I
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can&
#039; t take
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risk
of encountering my boss without my lucky
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watch
.
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Please
prefer speed post of Blue Dart. Mailing address is as follows: #36, Wilson Street,
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Vancover
, Canada 123

Looking forward to seeing you
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Soon
! !

With
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love


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Dharani
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS letter you have spent you last weekend with your friend and has lost watch write a letter to you friend 1 Thanking him her for last weekend 2 describe your watch 3 What will he she do with it v. 2

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  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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