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You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say: - What repairs are you going to do? - How will it affect the restaurant? - Provide a solution for the inconvenience. v.2

You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say: - What repairs are you going to do? - How will it affect the restaurant? - Provide a solution for the inconvenience. v. 2
Respected Sir/Madam, I am Kirti and live in a house next to your restaurant. I am writing this letter to apologize to you in advance for any inconvenience that might happen owing to certain crucial repairs and installation which needs to be done in my house. As a matter of fact, I have decided to install a few smoke detectors in my house for the purpose to get aware of a devastating fire. In addition, the outer walls of my house have deep rupture which demands urgent action to be renovated. Apart from this, the materials which are solely required for the construction work would yield hindrance in your main entrance. Furthermore, there is a loud sound in the fire alarm which can erect noise while testing. Therefore, to mitigate these problems, I recommend that you let the customers use the back door gateway. Moreover, regarding the fire alarm issue, I will test it in the evening after the duty hour. Additionally, if any damage will accrue during the working period then my expenses will be on. Looking forward to getting a prompt response from your side. Your Sincerely. kirti
Respected Sir/Madam,

I am
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Kirti
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
next
to your restaurant. I am writing this letter to apologize to you in advance for any inconvenience that might happen owing to certain crucial repairs and installation which needs to
be done
in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

As a matter of fact, I have decided to install a few smoke detectors in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
for the purpose to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
aware of a devastating fire.
In addition
, the outer walls of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
have deep rupture which demands urgent action to
be renovated
.

Apart from this, the materials which are
solely
required for the construction work would yield hindrance in your main entrance.
Furthermore
, there is a loud sound in the fire alarm which can erect noise while testing.

Therefore
, to mitigate these problems, I recommend that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
the customers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the back door gateway.
Moreover
, regarding the fire alarm issue, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
it in the evening after the duty hour.
Additionally
, if any damage will accrue during the working period then my expenses will be on.

Looking forward to getting a prompt response from your side.

Your
Sincerely
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
kirti
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say: - What repairs are you going to do? - How will it affect the restaurant? - Provide a solution for the inconvenience. v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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