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You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise froma new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of theUniversity. In your letter, Complain about the situationSay why thi v.2

You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise froma new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of theUniversity. In your letter, Complain about the situationSay why thi v. 2
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing regarding the amount of noise coming from the new canteen which has just opened near my University residence. Although I am pleased that we have this facility, the restaurant remains open up to midnight each night, and as a result there is considerable talking, shouting and the sound of motorbikes continuing until about 12. 30 each night. This causes me and my neighbours in the residence a serious problem, because at that time we are either trying to sleep, or in some cases trying to study in our bedrooms. In both cases, the noise and commotion disturbs us, making us tired in the mornings or affecting the progress of our studies. I am sure you will appreciate that this is a very worrying situation for us all. I would like to suggest that the campus authorities restrict the canteen’s opening to 11pm at the latest on weekdays, leaving it at midnight during the weekend. I propose that we also put up some signs reminding users to be considerate and to keep their noise to an absolute minimum. These are simple steps which would make us all very grateful indeed. Thank you for your attention to this important matter. Kind Regards, Claudia Maggioni
Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing regarding the amount of noise coming from the new canteen which has
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just
opened near

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my
University residence. Although I am
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pleased
that we have this facility, the restaurant remains
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open


up to midnight each night, and
as a result
there is considerable talking, shouting and the sound of

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motorbikes
continuing until about 12. 30 each night.

This causes me and my
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neighbours
in the residence a serious problem,
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because
at that time we are

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either
trying to sleep, or in
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some
cases trying to study in our bedrooms. In both cases, the noise
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and


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commotion
disturbs us, making us tired in the mornings or affecting the progress of our studies. I
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am


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sure
you will appreciate that this is a
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very
worrying situation for us all.

I would like to suggest that the campus authorities restrict the canteen’s opening to 11pm at the latest

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on
weekdays, leaving it at midnight during the weekend. I propose that we
also
put up
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some
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signs


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reminding
users to be considerate and to
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keep
their noise to an absolute minimum. These are
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simple


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steps
which would
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make
us all
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very
grateful
indeed
.

Thank you for your attention to this
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important
matter.

Kind Regards,

Claudia
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Maggioni
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes

IELTS letter You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise froma new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of theUniversity. In your letter, Complain about the situationSay why thi v. 2

Letter
  American English
16 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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