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You have recently used the services of a moving company. At the new place, you found out that some of your items were badly damaged. Write a letter to the company manager including the following: give details of your movelist items that were damagedsay wh v.2

You have recently used the services of a moving company. At the new place, you found out that some of your items were badly damaged. Write a letter to the company manager including the following: give details of your movelist items that were damagedsay wh v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding your service that I took while we were moving to our new home in the UK. Please let me to reveal in detail. As you check in your data, we had an agreement with your moving firm to move our home all items from Oxford Street to Queen Square no: 20 10th of March. Firstly, I appreciate for your fast and friendly employee but I can not say same thing on the subject of their attentive. After the moving new home, when we reached home, realized that some furnutireus were broken and damaged from differens sides. Brown-round dinner table, for instance had been broken left foot and small seat is now useless. As a result we would like to cover prices of our items that had been damaged and are sending insurance bill as enclosed to my letter. I look forward to hearing a positive respond from you in the near future. Your Faithfully.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding your service that I took while we were moving to our new home in the UK.
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Please
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let
me to reveal in detail.

As you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
in your data, we had an agreement with your moving firm to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
our home all items from Oxford Street to Queen Square no: 20 10th of March.
Firstly
, I appreciate for your
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fast
and friendly employee
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but
I can not say same thing on the subject of their attentive.

After the moving new home, when we reached home, realized that
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some
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furnutireus
were broken
and damaged from
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differens
sides. Brown-round dinner table,
for instance
had
been broken
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left
foot and
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small
seat is
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now
useless.

As a result
we would like to cover prices of our items that had
been damaged
and are sending insurance bill as enclosed to my letter.

I look forward to hearing a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
respond from you in the near future.

Your
Faithfully
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have recently used the services of a moving company. At the new place, you found out that some of your items were badly damaged. Write a letter to the company manager including the following: give details of your movelist items that were damagedsay wh v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
168 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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