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you have been seen an advertiement looking for volunteer to teach english overseas write to recuitment officer tell them where you saw advertisement explain why you would like to go describe the skills that you have that you think wpuld help v.2

you have been seen an advertiement looking for volunteer to teach english overseas write to recuitment officer tell them where you saw advertisement explain why you would like to go describe the skills that you have that you think wpuld help v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am John, dweller of Huston Street New York U. S. A, penning down this epistle with regard to the job of volunteer teacher at abroad as advertised in New York Times. I am planning to shift permanently to Canada in the following year, therefore this volunteer experience would help me in exploring about the cosmopolitan culture of Canada. Being a tutor would be impeccable measure to mingle up with the people of diverse culture, get rid of culture shock and imitate their traditions. Furthermore, this volunteer teaching would enhance the value of my resume as Canadian employers always look for those candidates who have been indulged in any kind of social work. As I have been working as an English teacher since 2011 in a college, thus I think I have versatile experience which would be conductive in teaching. I am a native speaker, hence I have comprehensive knowledge about the English as well as American accent which would would work as a wonder while imparting education to learners. I am eagerly waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, John
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am John, dweller of Huston Street New York U. S. A, penning down this epistle with regard to the job of volunteer teacher at abroad as advertised in New York Times.

I am planning to shift
permanently
to Canada in the following year,
therefore
this volunteer experience would
help
me in exploring about the cosmopolitan culture of Canada. Being a tutor would be impeccable measure to mingle up with the
people
of diverse culture,
get
rid of culture shock and imitate their traditions.
Furthermore
, this volunteer teaching would enhance the value of my resume as Canadian employers always look for those candidates who have
been indulged
in any kind of social work.

As I have been working as an English teacher since 2011 in a college,
thus
I
think
I have versatile experience which would be conductive in teaching. I am a native speaker,
hence
I have comprehensive knowledge about the English
as well
as American accent which
would would
work as a wonder while imparting education to learners.

I am
eagerly
waiting for your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

John
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter you have been seen an advertiement looking for volunteer to teach english overseas write to recuitment officer tell them where you saw advertisement explain why you would like to go describe the skills that you have that you think wpuld help v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
183 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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