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An old friend is coming to town and has invited you to go to the cinema. Write to your friend. In your letter Explain that you are unable to come Find out how long your friend is staying in townArrange a suitable time to meet v.2

An old friend is coming to town and has invited you to go to the cinema. Write to your friend. In your letter Explain that you are unable to come Find out how long your friend is staying in townArrange a suitable time to meet v. 2
Dear Thu, How is your family? Are your kids well? I am very happy when I know that you are coming. Thanks for your invite me to go movies but I am so sorry because I can' t watch film with you. Did you remember I told you about San' s wedding in last month? On the 1st of October, I will flight to Ha Noi to attend her wedding and I will spend five days at there. This is a reason why I can' t receive your invitation. How long have you been in Ho Chi Minh City? There are many beautiful places where you go sightseeing. I will comeback in 6th and could you arrange to meet me in this evening? I have many things want to tell you about. Best wishes for you, Calla Balls
Dear Thu,

How is your family? Are your kids well? I am
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very
happy when I know that you are coming. Thanks for your invite me to go movies
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but
I am
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so
sorry
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because
I
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can&
#039; t
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watch
film with you.

Did you remember I
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told
you about
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San&
#039; s wedding in last month? On the 1st of October, I will flight to Ha
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Noi
to attend her wedding and I will spend five days at there. This is a reason why I
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can&
#039; t receive your invitation.

How long have you been in Ho Chi Minh City? There are
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
places where you go sightseeing. I will comeback in 6th and could you arrange to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
me in this evening? I have
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many
things want to
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tell
you about.

Best wishes for you,

Calla Balls
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter An old friend is coming to town and has invited you to go to the cinema. Write to your friend. In your letter Explain that you are unable to come Find out how long your friend is staying in townArrange a suitable time to meet v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
137 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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