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write a letter to your friend you stayed with him or her and forget your watch over theresay thanks to him or herabout what u forgetnow what he or she need to do v.2

write a letter to your friend you stayed with him or her and forget your watch over theresay thanks to him or herabout what u forgetnow what he or she need to do v. 2
dear Rabia, hope you and your family is doing well. I must want to say thank' s to you for your hospitality during last week when I stayed at your place firstly, I' m writing to you inform you that I forgot my watch in your bedroom perhaps it could be in the drawer next to the bed I was in rush while doing packing my luggage accordingly, as I was getting late for airport. As we discussed that you will visit my home next month for stay over, I' m very excited and had lots of plans accordingly. we will visit some famous places here in my city and remember don' t forget to bring my watch as it was given by my sister on my birthday last year. looking forward to seeing from you once again I want to say thank' s for your hospitality.
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dear
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Rabia
,

hope you and your family is doing well. I
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must
want to say
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thank&
#039; s to you for your hospitality during last week when I stayed at your
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place


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firstly
,
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I&
#039; m writing to you inform you that I forgot my
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watch
in your bedroom perhaps it could be in the drawer
next
to the bed I was in rush while
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "going packing".
doing packing
my luggage
accordingly
, as I was getting late for airport.

As we discussed that you will visit my home
next
month for stay over,
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I&
#039; m
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very
excited and had lots of plans
accordingly
.
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we
will visit
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some
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famous
places here in my city and remember
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don&
#039; t forget to bring my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
as it was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
by my sister on my birthday last year.

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looking
forward to seeing from you

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once
again I want to say
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thank&
#039; s for your hospitality.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS letter write a letter to your friend you stayed with him or her and forget your watch over theresay thanks to him or herabout what u forgetnow what he or she need to do v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
147 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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