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write a letter to your friend you stayed with him or her and forget your watch over theresay thanks to him or herabout what u forgetnow what he or she need to do v.2

write a letter to your friend you stayed with him or her and forget your watch over theresay thanks to him or herabout what u forgetnow what he or she need to do v. 2

dear Rabia, hope you and your family is doing well. I must want to say thank' s to you for your hospitality during last week when I stayed at your place firstly, I' m writing to you inform you that I forgot my watch in your bedroom perhaps it could be in the drawer next to the bed I was in rush while doing packing my luggage accordingly, as I was getting late for airport. As we discussed that you will visit my home next month for stay over, I' m very excited and had lots of plans accordingly. we will visit some famous places here in my city and remember don' t forget to bring my watch as it was given by my sister on my birthday last year. looking forward to seeing from you once again I want to say thank' s for your hospitality.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDear
dear
Possible spelling mistake found.ArabiaRabinRabidLabia
Rabia
,

hope you and your family is doing well. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 want to say Possible spelling mistake found.thanksthank
thank&
#039; s to you for your hospitality during last week when I stayed at your Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphplace.place!place?place:place,place;
place


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFirstly
firstly
, Possible spelling mistake found.InIsIItIfID
I&
#039; m writing to you inform you that I forgot my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 in your bedroom perhaps it could be in the drawer next
 to the bed I was in rush while The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "going packing".going packing
doing packing
 my luggage accordingly
, as I was getting late for airport.

As we discussed that you will visit my home next
 month for stay over, Possible spelling mistake found.InIsIItIfID
I&
#039; m This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited and had lots of plans accordingly
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 will visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 places here in my city and remember Possible spelling mistake found.donedonsDonsDonadonaDON
don&
#039; t forget to bring my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 as it was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 by my sister on my birthday last year.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLooking
looking
 forward to seeing from you

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOnce
once
 again I want to say Possible spelling mistake found.thanksthank
thank&
#039; s for your hospitality. 

5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS letter write a letter to your friend you stayed with him or her and forget your watch over theresay thanks to him or herabout what u forgetnow what he or she need to do v. 2

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

147 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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