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You have recently gone to live in a new city Write a letter to your English speaking friend In your letter Explain why you have gone to live in the new city Describe the place where you are living Invite your friend to come and see you v.2

You have recently gone to live in a new city Write a letter to your English speaking friend In your letter Explain why you have gone to live in the new city Describe the place where you are living Invite your friend to come and see you v. 2
Dear Shankly, I am just writing this letter to let you know that I have recently moved to Florence, Italy, and I am loving it here. This is due to the reason that I have joined the Florentine University of Arts to study in the Bachelor of Medieval Arts programme which is a two-year course. I have found a small apartment for me to stay, which itself is built on top of a four-hundred-year old building. The whole place and the surroundings just seem like a medieval dream come true. My friend, I am literally so excited to roam around this magnificent old city with you. Its a sure thing to say that you will be smitten by its picturesque churches and palaces. Eagerly waiting to hear from you. With love, Gestalt.
Dear
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Shankly
,

I am
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writing this letter to
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let
you know that I have recently
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to Florence, Italy, and I
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am loving
it here.

This is due to the reason that I have
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joined
the Florentine University of Arts to study in the Bachelor of Medieval Arts
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programme
which is a two-year course.

I have found a
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small
apartment for me to stay, which itself
is built
on top of a four-hundred-year
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old
building. The whole place and the surroundings
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just
seem like a medieval dream
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come
true.

My friend, I am
literally
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so
excited to roam around this magnificent
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old
city with you.
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Its
a sure thing to say that you will
be smitten
by its picturesque churches and palaces.

Eagerly
waiting to hear from you.

With
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love
,

Gestalt.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
Learning is a treasure that will follow its owner everywhere.
Chinese Proverb

IELTS letter You have recently gone to live in a new city Write a letter to your English speaking friend In your letter Explain why you have gone to live in the new city Describe the place where you are living Invite your friend to come and see you v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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