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You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: Explain why you have gone to live in the new city Describe the place where you are living Invite your friend to come and see you v.3

You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: Explain why you have gone to live in the new city Describe the place where you are living Invite your friend to come and see you v. 3
Dear Donald, It is always a pleasure to write to you. You would be glad to hear that I have already moved to Sydney, where I was always intended to live. An exciting news for you that last month I was offered an impressive job from a transnational company which is operated from Sydney. Considering all the benefits and challenges, I come to the point that it is really a great opportunity for me. The company wanted me to join as early as possible and that is why I had to promptly move to Sydney. For this reason I could not get a chance to tell you about that. However, despite this short period of time living here, I can tell Sydney is an awesome city to live. Actually we live the area named The Rocks is close to the famous Sydney Harbour Bridge. It is a nice city-living location and close to some of Sydney’s best bars, restaurants and nightlife. If you are free in this weekend then let us celebrate in our new city. It would be enjoyable moment for us together. Yours truly, Matthew
Dear Donald,

It is always a pleasure to write to you. You would be glad to hear that I have already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to Sydney, where I was always intended to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
.
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "exciting news".
An exciting news
for you that last month I
was offered
an impressive job from a transnational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
which
is operated
from Sydney.

Considering all the benefits and challenges, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to the point that it is
really
a great opportunity for me. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
wanted me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
as early as possible and
that is
why I had to
promptly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
to Sydney.
For this reason
I could not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a chance to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you about that.

However
, despite this short period of time living here, I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
Sydney is an awesome city to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
. Actually we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
the area named The Rocks is close to the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
Sydney
Possible spelling mistake. 'Harbour' is British English.
Harbour
Bridge. It is a nice city-living location and close to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of Sydney’s best bars, restaurants and nightlife.

If you are free in this weekend then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
us celebrate in our new city. It would be enjoyable moment for us together.

Yours
truly
,

Matthew
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
As a hawk flieth not high with one wing, even so a man reacheth not to excellence with one tongue.
Roger Ascham

IELTS letter You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: Explain why you have gone to live in the new city Describe the place where you are living Invite your friend to come and see you v. 3

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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