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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit v.6

You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit v. 6
Dear Talha, Hope you are fine. I am fine with my family. This letter regards invite you to visit my new house. As you know that, I have been living in old house for last 6 years. But now, I am going to vacate the old house and have moved to new house, which is located in BB street. Due to some space constricts, the old house is not sophisticated for my family members. And the kitchen in old house also very small, which is not comfort for my wife. Next month, my parents will have been staying in my house. So surely, the old house having single bedroom is not sufficient for us. So I had planned to move a new house, which has one big bedroom, a big spacious kitchen and a common bathroom. The new house is comfort for my family. I am very enthusiasm to invite you for my new house for coming friday and to attend the grand function, which is arranged in my new house. Looking forward to see you in my new house. By Mohammed Aslam
Dear
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Talha
,

Hope you are fine. I am fine with my family. This letter regards invite you to visit my
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new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

As you know that, I have been living in
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old
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house
for last 6 years.
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But
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now
, I am going to vacate the
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old
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house
and have
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moved
to
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new
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house
, which
is located
in BB street.

Due to
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some
space constricts, the
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old
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house
is not sophisticated for my family members. And the kitchen in
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old
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house
also
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very
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small
, which is not comfort for my wife.
Next
month, my parents will have been staying in my
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house
.
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So
surely
, the
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old
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house
having single bedroom is not sufficient for us.
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So
I had planned to
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move
a
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new
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house
, which has one
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big
bedroom, a
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big
spacious kitchen and a common bathroom. The
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new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
is comfort for my family.

I am
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very
enthusiasm to invite you for my
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new
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house
for coming
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friday
and to attend the grand function, which
is arranged
in my
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new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Looking forward to
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see
you in my
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new
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house
.

By

Mohammed
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Aslam
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit v. 6

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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