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The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected sales for 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant. v.3

The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected sales for 2020.
The charts indicate the total magazines sold per person in five countries, namely in 2000, 2010 and anticipated turnover for 2020. It’s clear from the graph that magazines in three countries include Country A, Country B and Country C were the best-sellers in 2000 among three years 2000, 2010 and 2020. By contrast, other countries, Country D and Country E combined, had the lowest figure for those buying elements in 2000 far and wide. On the one hand, Country A, B and C are having a tendency to decrease the demand for magazines per person throughout 2000, 2010 and 2020. Country B has the first-rate sales in all three years, especially it reached the highest point of 50 magazines in 2000 and are expected to experience a minimal deterioration by 45 magazines in 2020. Apart from Country B, Country A and C have been declining the factor for magazines from 49 magazines and 37 magazines in 2000 to 38 and 31 in 2020 respectively by far. On the other hand, Country D and E always have the least magazines sold in this period, particularly, Country E has the slightest sales among the five countries. Noticeably, the number of buying magazines have been recovering slowly from 19 magazines in 2000 to 21 in 2020. Along Country D, Country E sold only 7 magazines per person in 2000 and went up by 9 magazines in 2010. In spite of this slight growth, the figure for buying magazines are similar to its number at the beginning of the period.
The charts indicate the total
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magazines
sold per person in five
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countries
,
namely
in 2000, 2010 and anticipated turnover for 2020.

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clear
from the graph that
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magazines
in three
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countries
include
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Country
A,
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Country
B and
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C were the best-sellers in 2000 among three years 2000, 2010 and 2020. By contrast, other
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countries
,
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Country
D and
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Country
E combined, had the lowest figure for those buying elements in 2000 far and wide.

On the one hand,
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Country
A, B and C are having a tendency to decrease the demand for
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magazines
per person throughout 2000, 2010 and 2020.
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Country
B has the
first
-rate sales in all three years,
especially
it reached the highest point of 50
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magazines
in 2000 and are
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expected
to experience a minimal deterioration by 45
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magazines
in 2020. Apart from
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Country
B,
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Country
A and C have been declining the factor for
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magazines
from 49
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magazines
and 37
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magazines
in 2000 to 38 and 31 in 2020
respectively
by far.

On the other hand
,
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D and E always have the least
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magazines
sold in this period,
particularly
,
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E has the slightest sales among the five
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countries
.
Noticeably
, the number of buying
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magazines
have been recovering
slowly
from 19
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magazines
in 2000 to 21 in 2020. Along
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D,
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E sold
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only
7
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magazines
per person in 2000 and went up by 9
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magazines
in 2010.
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In spite of
this slight growth, the figure for buying
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magazines
are similar to its number at the beginning of the period.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS letter The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected sales for 2020.

Letter
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4 paragraphs
256 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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