Hi! How are you? I am fine and hope this missive of mine finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. The purpose of mine to pen down this epistle is to invite you to visit in my new apartment.
Yes, I am working in a software development company which is situated in the outskirt area of the city and my old apartment was in the city centre. Due to this, I had to face a plethora of problems such as traffic congestion etcetera. To overcome myself from this problem I recently shifted to a new apartment which is near to my organisation.
Even though, my new apartment is not too big as my old one, but I am satisfied with it. Primarily, it is well equipped and containing two bedrooms along with one bathroom, kitchen and a little garden. It gives me the opportunity Who is it in the great ambience which will not only relax my body but also my mind.
Finally, I shifted to my new house, last Sunday. I intend to organise a party in which all our college friends are invited, so it will be a great time to get together after a long time. It would be very grateful if you come at that party to make it perpetuate to all of us.
Pay my regards to your family. 
Hi! How are you? I am fine and hope this missive of mine finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. The purpose of mine to pen down this epistle is to invite you to visit in my  
new
 apartment.
Yes, I am working in a software development  
company
 which  
is situated
 in the outskirt area of the city and my  
old
 apartment was in the city  
centre
. Due to this, I had to face a plethora of problems such as traffic congestion etcetera. To overcome myself from this problem I recently shifted to a  
new
 apartment which is near to my  
organisation
. 
Even though
, my  
new
 apartment is not too  
big
 as my  
old
 one,  
but
 I  
am satisfied
 with it.  
Primarily
, it is  
well equipped
 and containing two bedrooms along with one bathroom, kitchen and a  
little
 garden. It gives me the opportunity Who is it in the great ambience which will not  
only
 relax my body  
but
  also
 my mind. 
Finally
, I shifted to my  
new
  house
, last Sunday. I intend to  
organise
 a party in which all our college friends  
are invited
,  
so
 it will be a great time to  
get
 together after a long time. It would be  
very
 grateful if you  
come
 at that party to  
make
 it perpetuate to all of us.
Pay my regards to your family. 
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