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Essay topics: You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solutions. v. 1

Dear Sir, I recently cleared a job interview of your esteemed company and its my great fortune that I get a chance to work with you. The purpose of mine to pen down this epistle is to apologise you for not coming on the joining day because of some personal issues. As, I am the only son of my parents and unfortunately my mother had an accident, yesterday. However, she is out of danger but doctors recommended her to take appropriate rest for at least two weeks because of the critical situation. Therefore, I have to take care of her, so that she will recover properly. To be honest, I feel so guilty because I am unable to attend the first day of joining. My joining date is probably 15 November and because of my mother accident I will not able to come at that day. Indeed, I am so excited for that job, as it was the dream of mine to work at your organisation and now it comes true. My mother takes only 2 weeks to recover and after that I will definitely come at work. Although, it takes four days more after 15 November but assure you that I will work diligently to make sure the breakthroughs of our company. I would be very grateful if you give me some time by extending my joining date for days later instead of 15th November. I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Amn

IELTS letter Essay topics: You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solutions. v.1

Dear Sir, I recently cleared a job interview of your esteemed
company
and
its
my great fortune that I
get
a chance to work with you. The purpose of mine to pen down this epistle is to
apologise
you for not coming on the joining day
because
of
some
personal issues. As, I am the
only
son of my parents and unfortunately my mother had an accident, yesterday.
However
, she is out of
danger
but
doctors recommended her to take appropriate rest for at least two weeks
because
of the critical situation.
Therefore
, I
have to
take care of her,
so
that she will recover
properly
. To be honest, I feel
so
guilty
because
I am unable to attend the
first
day of joining. My joining date is
probably
15 November and
because
of my mother accident I will not able to
come
at that day.
Indeed
, I am
so
excited for that job, as it was the dream of mine to work at your
organisation
and
now
it
comes
true. My mother takes
only
2 weeks to recover and after that I will definitely
come
at work. Although, it takes four days more after 15 November
but
assure you that I will work
diligently
to
make
sure the breakthroughs of our
company
. I would be
very
grateful if you give me
some
time by extending my joining date for days later
instead
of 15th November. I look forward
to hear
from you. Yours
faithfully
,
Amn
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
8 paragraphs
245 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≥ 7
  • Band score ≤ 6
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