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Essay topics: You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say- Why did you move there- Describe the new apartment- Invite him/her to visit you v.2

Essay topics: You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say- Why did you move there- Describe the new apartment- Invite him/her to visit you v. 2
Dear Raman, Hi! How are you? I am fine and hope this missive of mine finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. The purpose of mine to pen down this epistle is to invite you to visit in my new apartment. Yes, I am working in a software development company which is situated in the outskirt area of the city and my old apartment was in the city centre. Due to this, I had to face a plethora of problems such as traffic congestion etcetera. To overcome myself from this problem I recently shifted to a new apartment which is near to my organisation. Even though, my new apartment is not too big as my old one, but I am satisfied with it. Primarily, it is well equipped and containing two bedrooms along with one bathroom, kitchen and a little garden. It gives me the opportunity Who is it in the great ambience which will not only relax my body but also my mind. Finally, I shifted to my new house, last Sunday. I intend to organise a party in which all our college friends are invited, so it will be a great time to get together after a long time. It would be very grateful if you come at that party to make it perpetuate to all of us. Pay my regards to your family. Yours truly, Aman
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Raman
,

Hi! How are you? I am fine and hope this missive of mine finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. The purpose of mine to pen down this epistle is to invite you to visit in my
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new
apartment.

Yes, I am working in a software development
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company
which
is situated
in the outskirt area of the city and my
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old
apartment was in the city
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centre
. Due to this, I had to face a plethora of problems such as traffic congestion etcetera. To overcome myself from this problem I recently shifted to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
apartment which is near to my
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organisation
.

Even though
, my
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new
apartment is not too
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big
as my
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old
one,
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but
I
am satisfied
with it.
Primarily
, it is
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well equipped
and containing two bedrooms along with one bathroom, kitchen and a
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little
garden. It gives me the opportunity Who is it in the great ambience which will not
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only
relax my body
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but
also
my mind.

Finally
, I shifted to my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
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house
, last Sunday. I intend to
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organise
a party in which all our college friends
are invited
,
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so
it will be a great time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
together after a long time. It would be
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very
grateful if you
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come
at that party to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it perpetuate to all of us.

Pay my regards to your family.

Yours
truly
,

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Aman
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4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter Essay topics: You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say- Why did you move there- Describe the new apartment- Invite him/her to visit you v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
231 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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