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Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: •Explain why you have gone to live in the new city•Describe the place where you are living•Invite your friend to come and see you v.2

Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: •Explain why you have gone to live in the new city•Describe the place where you are living•Invite your friend to come and see you v. 2
Dear Sara, I hope you' re doing well. I’m doing good too. Its been long time I haven' t written to you I' m witting to inform you that I have moved to England recently. I was doing an internship with multinational company the higher & nbsp; management of the company was very satisfied from my work during my internship. However, they have offered me a position of business analyst in one of their branch in England. I was very excited for the offer and accept it. Further, now, I' m sharing an apartment with few local girls they are very kind and supportive. This apartment is only thirty minutes’ drive away from my work, I must mention that I was lucky to find place in this busy area, I have all the require facilities nearby have a very gigantic department store, and few traditional restaurants like Indian and Arabic so I don’t suffer a lot in finding halal food. In addition, Christmas is approaching near I really want you to come over we can spend some quality time I will be having two long weeks off and your company can really make difference we can planned to visit northern cities of UK. Sara I have to wind up now I am getting late for work. I will look forward to hearing from you. Yours loving, Azra Jaan
Dear Sara,

I hope
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The phrase 're doing' should be written as one word.
re doing
well. I’m doing
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good
too.
Did you mean "It's" (="It has") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Its
been long time I
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haven&
#039; t written to you
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I&
#039; m witting to inform you that I have
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moved
to England recently.

I was doing an internship with multinational
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company
the higher
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&amp
;
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nbsp
; management of the
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company
was
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very
satisfied from my work during my internship.
However
, they have offered me a position of business analyst in one of their branch in England. I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
excited for the offer and accept it.
Further
,
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now
,
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I&
#039; m sharing an apartment with few local girls they are
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very
kind and supportive. This apartment is
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only
thirty minutes’ drive away from my work, I
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must
mention that I was lucky to find place in this busy area, I have all the
The word 'require' is not a noun. Did you mean "requirement"?
require
facilities nearby have a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
gigantic department store, and few traditional restaurants like Indian and Arabic
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so
I don’t suffer a lot in finding halal food.

In addition
, Christmas is approaching near I
really
want you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
over we can spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
quality time I will be having two long weeks off and your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
can
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
difference we can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "plan"
planned
to visit northern cities of UK. Sara I
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have to
wind up
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now
I am getting late for work. I will look forward to hearing from you.

Yours loving,

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Azra
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Jaan
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
As a hawk flieth not high with one wing, even so a man reacheth not to excellence with one tongue.
Roger Ascham

IELTS letter Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: •Explain why you have gone to live in the new city•Describe the place where you are living•Invite your friend to come and see you v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
227 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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