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You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one Of his objects. Write a letter and explain-how are you enjoyed staying with your friend. -Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how much stake happened -mention how v.2

You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one Of his objects. Write a letter and explain-how are you enjoyed staying with your friend. -Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how much stake happened -mention how v. 2
Dear John Hi! How are you? I am fine and hope you are also sailing on the same boat. The purpose of mine to penning down this Epistle is to inform you that by mistake, I took your research file with my possession. Last month, it was a nice experience to State at your home, after such a long period. I enjoy a lot with you but one thing that I enjoyed most, what is our picnic day. Fortunately, the weather was just fabulous in that day and the ambience of the picnic destination was really great, it was breathtaking view. Moreover, yours parents are very amicable and your mother is a great cook. I still remember her Cuisines which she made for me were delicious. Furthermore we clicked a lots of memories, Bichara memorising and I remember these days with nostalgia. As, I came up from your house suddenly because I urgently received a call from my employer about a business meeting, which was very urgent. Unfortunately, I carried your research file in my possession, when I noticed, it was too late. actually, I was in hurry to pack my bag and your file was on my bed and I seem that it was mine, that is the reason why I packed your research file in my belongings. I would promise you that I will send you this by air mail because I know it was really important for you. I am really sorry for the inconvenience which I caused you. Wish you are good luckand pay my regards to your parents. Yours truly Aman
Dear John

Hi! How are you? I am fine and hope you are
also
sailing on the same boat. The purpose of mine to penning down this Epistle is to inform you that by mistake, I took your research
file
with my possession.

Last month, it was a nice experience to State at your home, after such a long period. I enjoy a lot with you
but
one thing that I enjoyed most, what is our picnic day.
Fortunately
, the weather was
just
fabulous in that day and the ambience of the picnic destination was
really
great, it was breathtaking view.
Moreover
, yours parents are
very
amicable and your mother is a great cook. I
still
remember her Cuisines which she made for me were delicious.
Furthermore
we clicked
a lots
of memories,
Bichara
memorising
and I remember these days with nostalgia.

As, I came up from your
house
suddenly
because
I
urgently
received a call from my employer about a business meeting, which was
very
urgent. Unfortunately, I carried your research
file
in my possession, when I noticed, it was too late.
actually
, I was in hurry to pack my bag and your
file
was on my bed and I seem that it was mine,
that is
the reason why I packed your research
file
in my belongings. I would promise you that I will
send
you this by air mail
because
I know it was
really
important
for you. I am
really
sorry for the inconvenience which I caused you.

Wish you are
good
luckand
pay my regards to your parents.

Yours
truly


Aman
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS letter You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one Of his objects. Write a letter and explain-how are you enjoyed staying with your friend. -Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how much stake happened -mention how v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
265 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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