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Recently you have read a book and thought to tell your friend about the book. Write a letter to your friend and say What is the book about? - What is the book’s name and who is the author? - Why would it be useful for him/her? - Where can he/she get this b v.1

Recently you have read a book and thought to tell your friend about the book. Write a letter to your friend and say What is the book about? - What is the book’s name and who is the author? - Why would it be useful for him/her? - Where can he/she get this b v. 1
Dear John, I believe you will receive this letter in pink health and high spirit. I am sorry that it is been such a long time since I last wrote. I have been run off my feet at work. I am writing to tell you about the book I had read recently. You know how much I love reading novels and when I start reading then I cannot put it book down. Recently my colleague gave me an adventurous novel named The Effect of Gravity. The story of the novel was about inspiration, revenge, forgiveness, and imprisonment. You told me that you want to write some dissertation on the Gravity when we met last time at a Café. I hope this novel will help to complete your thesis with the flying colors. If you need a soft copy of that book then I can send you through email, otherwise, you can purchase it online through Amazon and get some discount on its original price as well. I hope to see you soon. Take care, Vibhu Khurana
Dear John,

I believe you will receive this letter in pink health and high spirit. I am sorry that it
is been
such a long time since I last wrote.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
been run
off my feet at work.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you about the book I had read recently.

You know how much I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
novels
and when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
reading then I cannot put it book down. Recently my colleague gave me an adventurous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
novel
named The Effect of Gravity. The story of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
novel
was about inspiration, revenge, forgiveness, and imprisonment.

You
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that you want to write
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
dissertation on the Gravity when we met last time at a Café. I hope this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
novel
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to complete your thesis with the flying colors.

If you need a soft copy of that book then I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
you through email,
otherwise
, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
it online through Amazon and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
discount on its original price
as well
.

I hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Take care,

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Vibhu
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Khurana
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
Language comes first. It’s not that language grows out of consciousness, if you haven’t got language, you can’t be conscious.
Alan Moore

IELTS letter Recently you have read a book and thought to tell your friend about the book. Write a letter to your friend and say What is the book about? - What is the book’s name and who is the author? - Why would it be useful for him/her? - Where can he/she get this b v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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