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You have recently attended a professional course. Write a letter to your manager to thank him/her for the opportunity. In your letter, you should tell: – What it was about? – Explain why it was helpful to you. – Suggest other co-workers who should atte v.2

You have recently attended a professional course. Write a letter to your manager to thank him/her for the opportunity. In your letter, you should tell: – What it was about? – Explain why it was helpful to you. – Suggest other co-workers who should atte v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my deep appreciation and thanks for giving me the opportunity, to attend the course ' Certified financial planner' at Muscat Training and Conference center. It was a specialized course, with up-to-date tools and strategies to help finance managers in becoming experts. The course introduces us with the latest methods and software to make financial reports, activity reports, balance sheets to name but a few. As an accountant, this course broadens my mind and polished my technical skills. I became a financial expert and able to manage all aspects of the work more efficiently and effectively. this course will serve to guide and direct me in the execution of all my upcoming projects. I would suggest all the members working along with me to take this project. this will improve their knowledge and skills and will help them boost their credibility and prestige within their network. thank you once again for this referral. Yours Faithfully,
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my deep appreciation and thanks for giving me the opportunity, to attend the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
' Certified financial
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planner&
#039; at Muscat Training and Conference center.

It was a specialized
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
, with up-to-date tools and strategies to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
finance managers in becoming experts. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
introduces us with the latest methods and software to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
financial reports, activity reports, balance sheets to name
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
a few.

As an accountant, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
broadens my mind and polished my technical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. I became a financial expert and able to manage all aspects of the work more
efficiently
and
effectively
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
will serve to guide and direct me in the execution of all my upcoming projects.

I would suggest all the members working along with me to take this project.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
this
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their knowledge and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them boost their credibility and prestige within their network.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
thank
you once again for this referral.

Yours
Faithfully
,
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter You have recently attended a professional course. Write a letter to your manager to thank him/her for the opportunity. In your letter, you should tell: – What it was about? – Explain why it was helpful to you. – Suggest other co-workers who should atte v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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