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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express conce v.6

You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express conce v. 6
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this letter in connection to a letter received from your bank, asking me to Send an acknowledgement for the receipt of a new bank card. Unfortunately, the card is Missing from the envelope. I asked your bank to issue me a new card, as I misplaced my old card and I am not able to find it. As I have to travel, abroad, frequently for my company business meetings; I generally use your bank’s card only, as I am using it from last few years and I have this only bank card with me. So, this card is vital for me and I am afraid, if I don’t get the card with next 3-4 days, my next travel may affect due to this. Keeping my concern at the top, issue me a new card as soon as possible and this time, please make sure the card is included in the envelope. Thank you kindly in advance, Yours faithfully, Pardeep Singh
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter in connection to a letter received from your
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bank
, asking me to

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Send
an
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acknowledgement
for the receipt of a new
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bank
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
. Unfortunately, the
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card
is

Missing from the envelope.

I asked your
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bank
to issue me a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
, as I misplaced my
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old
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card and
I am not able

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to
find it. As I
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have to
travel, abroad,
frequently
for my
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company
business meetings; I
generally
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use
your
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bank’s
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card
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only
, as I am using it from last few years and I have this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
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bank
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card
with me.
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So
, this
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card
is vital for
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
me and
I am afraid, if I don’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
with
next
3-4 days, my
next
travel may affect due to this.

Keeping my concern at the top, issue me a new
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card
as
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soon
as possible and this time,
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure the
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card
is included
in the envelope.

Thank you kindly in advance,

Yours
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Pardeep
Singh
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express conce v. 6

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
166 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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