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You have organized to go on holidays with your friend - However, you must change your plans. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter; tell him how much you are looking forward to the holiday. Explain why you must change your plans. Suggest alternative v.2

You have organized to go on holidays with your friend - However, you must change your plans. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter; tell him how much you are looking forward to the holiday. Explain why you must change your plans. Suggest alternative v. 2
Dear Sara, I hope you are doing well. I was planning to write you about my change in plan to the holiday destination which we organized last month. As you know government has called an emergency in country therefore, essential services like hospitals are made high alert to not allow any doctor off during this period. I am hoping for situation to get better so, that we could plan another holiday as this time I was so elated that, I would be able to go on vacation with you after so long and we would have best time together, but due to unseen circumstances we possibly have to now plan it for later However, I have my annual leaves saved, which I can utilize in December. I believe you will be having your winter vacations too at that time of the year so, how about we go to Northern areas to witness snow and some more fun activities. Hoping to hear from you Best wishes Haya
Dear Sara,

I hope you are doing well. I was planning to write you about my
change
in plan to the holiday destination which we organized last month. As you know
government
has called an emergency in country
therefore
, essential services like hospitals
are made
high alert to not
allow
any doctor off during this period.

I am hoping for situation to
get
better
so
, that we could plan another holiday as this time I was
so
elated that, I would be able to go on vacation with you after
so
long and
we would
have best
time together,
but
due to unseen circumstances we
possibly
have to
now
plan it for later

However
, I have my annual
leaves
saved, which I can utilize in December. I believe you will be having your winter vacations too at that time of the year
so
, how about we go to Northern areas to witness snow and
some
more fun activities.

Hoping to hear from you

Best wishes

Haya
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have organized to go on holidays with your friend - However, you must change your plans. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter; tell him how much you are looking forward to the holiday. Explain why you must change your plans. Suggest alternative v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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