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You have organized to go on holiday with your friend However you must change your plans Write a letter to your friend In your letter 1 Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday 2 Explain why you must change your plans 3 Suggest alter v.1

You have organized to go on holiday with your friend However you must change your plans Write a letter to your friend In your letter 1 Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday 2 Explain why you must change your plans 3 Suggest alter v. 1
Dear Friend, I am writing this letter to inform you that we need to postpone our holiday plan of Italy due to COVID-19 pandemic. I have organized all our travel arrangements but as these is a crucial thing and we can not risk lives of ours and our family members. I have planned and shortlisted all the attraction of Italy and booked our stay and travel tickets, but this is a Pandemic declared by WHO and a lot of people already died their. Maximum nations have declared a complete lockdown and passengers who were in the middle of their journey asked to go back to their home country. Government has declared full refund of travel tickets so we do not need to worry about that and I hope you can understand the situation now. We will plan our holiday in near future when all this settle down and people will be back to their normal life. I have shortlisted some other destinations which we can think upon for our holiday plan. This time we will plan for a wildlife sanctuary or a road trip and i assure you that you will love it. I have already applied for refund and I will book our tickets for the next journey as soon as i will get the refund from travel company and hotel. Thanks XYZ
Dear Friend,

I am writing this letter to inform you that we need to postpone our holiday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
of Italy due to COVID-19 pandemic. I have organized all our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travel
arrangements
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
as
The verb 'is' is singular. Did you mean: "This is" or "these am", "these are", "these aren"?
these is
a crucial
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
thing and
we can not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
of ours and our family members.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have planned and shortlisted all the attraction of Italy and booked our stay and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travel
tickets,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this is a Pandemic declared by WHO and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
died
their. Maximum nations have declared a complete lockdown and passengers who were in the middle of their journey asked to go back to their home country.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Government
has declared full refund of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travel
tickets
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
we do not need to worry about that and I hope you can understand the situation
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.

We will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
our holiday in near future when all this settle down and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
will be back to their normal life. I have shortlisted
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other destinations which we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
upon for our holiday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
. This time we will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
for a wildlife sanctuary or a road trip and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
assure you that you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
it. I have already applied for refund and I will book our tickets for the
next
journey as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the refund from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travel
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and hotel.

Thanks

XYZ
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter You have organized to go on holiday with your friend However you must change your plans Write a letter to your friend In your letter 1 Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday 2 Explain why you must change your plans 3 Suggest alter v. 1

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
223 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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