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you have notices that there are some maintenance and hygienic related issues with a public park near the house you have recently moved to. write a letter to your local council complaining about the condition of the park v.2

you have notices that there are some maintenance and hygienic related issues with a public park near the house you have recently moved to. write a letter to your local council complaining about the condition of the park v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about the maintenance of a public park which is located on the opposite side of my house. To begin with, I have moved to this place with my family members a couple of weeks ago. Yesterday, i have visited to a nearest park and i came back to my house within minutes just due to its maintenance problem. People visiting the park throw litter just anywhere in the park besides in a litter. Moreover, there is no watchman and some local individuals throw domestic garbage at the backside of the garden. furthermore, children frequently come into the park to play with some refreshments and they usually throw it anywhere. I am highly disappointed with the condition of the park. The dirtiness and unhygienic in the park can spread numerous ailments. I expect immediate action to taken from your side to resolve these issues. Your Faithfully, Abc
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complain about the maintenance of a public
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park
which
is located
on the opposite side of my
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house
.

To
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begin
with, I have
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moved
to this place with my family members a couple of weeks ago. Yesterday,
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i
have visited to
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a
nearest
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park
and
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i
came back to my
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house
within minutes
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just
due to its maintenance problem.
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People
visiting the
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park
throw litter
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just
anywhere in the
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park
besides
in a litter.
Moreover
, there is no watchman and
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some
local individuals throw domestic garbage at the backside of the garden.
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furthermore
, children
frequently
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come
into the
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park
to play with
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some
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refreshments and
they
usually
throw it anywhere.

I am
highly
disappointed with the condition of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
. The dirtiness and unhygienic in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
can spread numerous ailments. I
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expect
immediate action to
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taken
from your side to resolve these issues.

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Your
Faithfully
,

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Abc
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS letter you have notices that there are some maintenance and hygienic related issues with a public park near the house you have recently moved to. write a letter to your local council complaining about the condition of the park v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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