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You have missed some important papers accidently in a taxi. Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi company. In your letter: ⦁ Give the details of your journey⦁ Explain why those papers are important for you⦁ Suggest what can the manager do v.2

You have missed some important papers accidently in a taxi. Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi company. In your letter: ⦁ Give the details of your journey⦁ Explain why those papers are important for you⦁ Suggest what can the manager do v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to report the lost document in the taxi today. I have used RTA cab to commute in the morning. After reaching the office, I have realised that by accident my folder is left behind in the back seat of the vehicle. I had boarded the taxi on 12th April at 8: 30 AM from World trade centre to Business Bay. It was a Hyundai Sonata vehicle with the plate number B34596. The driver was of Asian origin with a white beard. During the journey, I was on an urgent call, and while getting down, I forgot to pick my folder. The folder has an original college degree which I need to present to the immigration agent within this week. It is essential for me to submit it and getting a duplicate one will be a lengthy hassle. I have submitted a request in the Department of Lost and Found, and it will be appreciable if you can pursue the matter from your side also. The degree is an important document, thus it a sincere request to you to help me in finding the lost folder. I look forward to your immediate action in this regard. Sincerely Monika
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to report the lost document in the taxi
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today
. I have
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used
RTA cab to commute in the morning. After reaching the office, I have
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realised
that by accident my folder is
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left
behind in the back seat of the vehicle.

I had boarded the taxi on 12th April at 8: 30 AM from World trade
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centre
to Business Bay. It was a Hyundai Sonata vehicle with the plate number B34596. The driver was of Asian origin with a white beard. During the journey, I was on an urgent call, and while getting down, I forgot to pick my folder.

The folder has an original college degree which I need to present to the immigration agent within this week. It is essential for me to submit it and getting a duplicate one will be a lengthy hassle.

I have submitted a request in the Department of Lost and Found, and it will be appreciable if you can pursue the matter from your side
also
. The degree is an
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important
document,
thus
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it
a sincere request to you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me in finding the lost folder.

I look forward to your immediate action in this regard.

Sincerely


Monika
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You have missed some important papers accidently in a taxi. Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi company. In your letter: ⦁ Give the details of your journey⦁ Explain why those papers are important for you⦁ Suggest what can the manager do v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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