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Marina has just started a new course at college and her tutor has asked her to write him a letter telling him something about herself. v. 2

Dear Mr. Kashif, I am an undergraduate student of final year studying B. S Civil Engineering from NED University, Karachi. I have selected Transportation Engineering (Part-II) as an optional course which is best subjected to my interest. I have always been keen to become a civil engineer whenever I thought I would go for my professional studies. I admire the aesthetics of the architectural ideas and want to fulfill the requirements needed to present it physically in front of our eyes. I also love to go for long journeys and travel in all modes of transportation and probably due to this hobby, I have developed my interest in Transportation Engineering. Studying this subject would guide me in all calculations related to geometric and pavement design. This would also help me in achieving good scores in my final year exams as my dissertation is also related to the same course. I hope I would be able to continue my passion along with studies and would not give you chance to complain for my decision. Regards Huma Mohiuddin

IELTS letter Marina has just started a new course at college and her tutor has asked her to write him a letter telling him something about herself. v.2

Dear Mr.
Kashif
,

I am an undergraduate student of final year studying B. S Civil Engineering from NED University, Karachi. I have selected Transportation Engineering (Part-II) as an optional course which is best subjected to my interest.

I
have always been keen to become a civil engineer whenever I
thought
I would go for my professional studies.
I
admire the aesthetics of the architectural
ideas
and want to fulfill the requirements needed to present it
physically
in front of our eyes.
I
also
love
to go for long journeys and travel in all modes of transportation and
probably
due to this hobby, I have developed my interest in Transportation Engineering. Studying this subject would guide me in all calculations related to geometric and pavement design. This would
also
help
me in achieving
good
scores in my final year exams as my dissertation is
also
related to the same course.

I hope I would be able to continue my passion along with studies and would not give you chance to
complain for
my decision.

Regards

Huma
Mohiuddin
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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