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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your lettercorrect the information in the articleexplain why it is import v. 5

Dear Sir, I am a long-standing reader of your magazine " The destinations" . I am writing this letter mainly to draw your immediate attention and correct the false information published about my city Surat on the December 2019 monthly edition, page number 19 under the heading " Virtual visit to Surat" I am glad to read the article about my city in such an esteemed magazine. According to the article the city does not have direct overseas destinations connectivity; whereas the fact is the airport connects to several countries such as Dubai, Australia, Singapore and few more. Another one is that the city have extremely few tourist places; however, the truth is the city has large the number of tourist areas such as Gir Safari, Kanha National park, Science museum and many more. Therefore, I believe it is extremely crucial for you and your team to publish correct information as you have over one lakh subscribers. Such facts shall prevent tourists to visit my city. I hereby would like to request you to kindly cease the distribution of this editorial instantaneously, edit the details, and re-distribute it. I hope you would understand the graveness of misleading the people and would do the necessary changes at the earliest. Thanking you in advance. Your faithfully Joe Peter

IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your lettercorrect the information in the articleexplain why it is import v.5

Dear Sir, I am a long-standing reader of your magazine
&quot
; The
destinations&quot
;
.
I am writing this letter
mainly
to draw your immediate attention and correct the false information published about my city
Surat
on the December 2019 monthly edition, page number 19 under the heading
&quot
; Virtual visit to
Surat&quot
; I am glad to read the article about my city in such an esteemed magazine. According to the article the city does not have direct overseas
destinations
connectivity; whereas the fact is the airport connects to several countries such as Dubai, Australia, Singapore and few more. Another one is that the city have
extremely
few tourist places;
however
, the truth is the city has large the number of tourist areas such as
Gir
Safari,
Kanha
National park, Science museum and
many
more.
Therefore
, I believe it is
extremely
crucial for you and your team to publish correct information as you have over one lakh subscribers. Such facts shall
prevent
tourists to visit my city. I hereby would like to request you to kindly cease the distribution of this editorial
instantaneously
, edit the
details
, and re-distribute it. I hope you would understand the graveness of misleading the
people
and would do the necessary
changes
at the earliest. Thanking you in advance. Your
faithfully
Joe Peter
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
Letter
9 paragraphs
215 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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