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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v. 3

Dear Sir or Madam, A couple of weeks ago, your popular international travel magazine, in its 250th edition, published an article about my hometown in an effort to provide a bit more exposure to the travel-related activities in it. Well, while I appreciate this noble effort of yours, I regret to inform you that there is a factual error in your article that requires immediate correction. In fact, your article in question says that the migratory birds visit our town during the month of April while the correct information is that they start to visit our hometown from early February. By the way, correcting this information on your magazine is very important for the livelihood of many people in my hometown because they heavily rely on the tourist spending of the visitors who come to visit our town in order to see these migratory birds. Therefore, I would like to request you to please issue a correctional notice in your magazine’s next publication about the previous mistake so that the prospective tourists don’t get confused about the timing of the migratory birds’ visit to my hometown. Thank you for your consideration in advance. Yours faithfully, Antonio Perez

IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v.3

Dear Sir or Madam, A couple of weeks ago, your popular international travel magazine, in its 250th edition, published an article about my
hometown
in an effort to provide a bit more exposure to the travel-related activities in it. Well, while I appreciate this noble effort of yours, I regret to inform you that there is a factual error in your article that requires immediate correction. In fact, your article in question says that the migratory birds
visit
our town during the month of April while the correct information is that they
start
to
visit
our
hometown
from early February. By the way, correcting this information on your magazine is
very
important
for the livelihood of
many
people
in my
hometown
because
they
heavily
rely on the tourist spending of the visitors who
come
to
visit
our town in order to
see
these migratory birds.
Therefore
, I would like to request you to
please
issue a correctional notice in your magazine’s
next
publication about the previous mistake
so
that the prospective tourists don’t
get
confused about the timing of the migratory birds’
visit
to my
hometown
. Thank you for your consideration in advance. Yours
faithfully
, Antonio Perez
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
Letter
6 paragraphs
196 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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