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You recently saw a job advertisement for a tour guide, to show your local area and its attractions to English-speaking tourists. Write a letter to a tourist agency and say– Where did you see this advertisement? – Explain why you are suitable for this j v.2

You recently saw a job advertisement for a tour guide, to show your local area and its attractions to English-speaking tourists. Write a letter to a tourist agency and say– Where did you see this advertisement? – Explain why you are suitable for this j v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I write to apply for the position of Tour Guide as advertised by your organization on the 25th of July 2016. Please find enclosed my curriculum vitae and statement of purpose. My first degree was in Event Management from University of Nigeria, Nsuka and my final year project was on tourism guide with emphasis on tourists from anglophone countries. In the course of executing this project, I explored several tourist locations within and around Oguta. To understand places that will be of interest to these group of people, I studied their traditions and cultures, as well as past tourist locations visited. I realized that they found water and hilly areas quite attractive, as well as areas that tell sound cultural stories about the community and its inhabitants. I therefore summarized that Oguta Lake, the Oranga Hill and the Nnamdi Azikiwe Museum will be off interest to these group of people. Also, I have gone on to garner six years of relevant experience since graduation in 2006. I have observed that our community does not attract enough visitors and in my opinion we can enhance this situation by cleaning up the water bodies, the waterfronts and the other locations as well. Also, there is the need to paint some of these areas and plant some flowers to make them look more beautiful. However, in making these places more interesting, we need to be careful not to alter the stories they tell as that is the essence of these sites. With my qualifications and experience, I hope that you will consider me a match for the job and extend an invitation for an interview to me, as I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Okoronkwo Alfred Chinedu.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I write to apply for the position of Tour Guide as advertised by your organization on the 25th of July 2016.
Please
find enclosed my curriculum vitae and statement of purpose.

My
first
degree was in
Event
Management from University of Nigeria,
Nsuka
and my final year project was on tourism guide with emphasis on tourists from anglophone countries. In the course of executing this project, I explored several tourist locations within and around
Oguta
. To understand places that will be of interest to these group of
people
, I studied their traditions and cultures,
as well
as past tourist locations visited. I realized that they found water and hilly areas quite attractive,
as well
as areas that
tell
sound cultural stories about the community and its inhabitants. I
therefore
summarized that
Oguta
Lake, the
Oranga
Hill and the
Nnamdi
Azikiwe
Museum will be off interest to these group of
people
.
Also
, I have gone on to garner six years of relevant experience since graduation in 2006.

I have observed that our community does not attract
enough
visitors and in my opinion we can enhance this situation by cleaning up the water bodies, the waterfronts and the other locations
as well
.
Also
, there is the need to paint
some
of these areas and plant
some
flowers to
make
them look more
beautiful
.
However
, in making these places more interesting, we need to be careful not to alter the stories they
tell
as
that is
the essence of these sites.

With my qualifications and experience, I hope that you will consider me a match for the job and extend an invitation for an interview to me, as I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Okoronkwo
Alfred
Chinedu
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS letter You recently saw a job advertisement for a tour guide, to show your local area and its attractions to English-speaking tourists. Write a letter to a tourist agency and say– Where did you see this advertisement? – Explain why you are suitable for this j v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
291 words
6.0
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