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You have just read an artice in an international travel magazine which containedsome information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter-Correct the information in the article-explain why it is import v.2

You have just read an artice in an international travel magazine which containedsome information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter-Correct the information in the article-explain why it is import v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to draw your attention to an wrong information provided about the Ambaji temple, located at Ahmedabad and how it can be corrected. I am regular reader of your magazine because most of the details are correct, although in the article of dated 25th August, it is mentioned that the Ambaji temple is a tourist destination with good accommodation facilities and best suitable for elderly; however the reality is totally reverse. The weather is extremely cold which does not suits to old age visitors and people having respiratory disorders. Besides, although hotels are not available, tourist can live in cottages which are safe, neat and clean. It is absolutely crucial to give correct information because many readers plan their holidays based on details provided by you as yours magazine is one of the most trustworthy publications. If you provide any incorrect or incomplete information, it would impact your brand equity. It would like to suggest you to correct the information provided in the earlier article and rewrite whole script once again. This would not only beneficial for the regular readers but also good for you to maintain transparency. Hope you would understand importance of the correcting details and provide correct one in next article. Yours faithfully, Smith Gandhi
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention to an
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wrong
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information
provided about the
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Ambaji
temple, located at Ahmedabad and how it can
be corrected
.

I
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am regular
reader of your magazine
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because
most of the
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details
are
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correct
, although in the article of dated 25th August, it
is mentioned
that the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Ambaji
temple is a tourist destination with

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good
accommodation facilities and best suitable for elderly;
however
the reality is
totally
reverse. The weather is
extremely
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cold
which does not suits to
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old
age visitors
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and


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people
having respiratory disorders.
Besides
, although hotels are not available, tourist can
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live
in cottages which are safe, neat and clean.

It is
absolutely
crucial to give
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correct
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information
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because
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many
readers plan their holidays based on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
provided by you as yours magazine is one of the most trustworthy

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publications
. If you provide any incorrect or incomplete
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
, it would impact your brand equity.

It would like to suggest you to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
correct
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
provided in the earlier article and rewrite whole script once again. This would not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
beneficial
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
for


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the
regular readers
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for you to maintain transparency.

Hope you would understand importance of the correcting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
and provide
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
correct
one in
next
article.

Yours
faithfully
,

Smith Gandhi
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes
Change your language and you change your thoughts.
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IELTS letter You have just read an artice in an international travel magazine which containedsome information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter-Correct the information in the article-explain why it is import v. 2

Letter
  American English
12 paragraphs
213 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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