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You have read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter- Correct the information in the article- Explain why it is import v.2

You have read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter- Correct the information in the article- Explain why it is import v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, With reference to the Times travel magazine issued on 31st July 2019, I' d like to emphasis the false information given in one of the articles in the magazine. In particular, that article stated that the murder incident happened in Colombo 7, where I' m living. However, which is false information as there was no such incident reported in my town in the recent past. I believe that someone has given such false information to the editor of the magazine either by mistake or deliberately to spoil the repute of my town. Therefore, I urge the editor of the magazine to make the corrective measures and actions to rectify news. As this is one of the world-famous magazines all over the world, it is your responsibility to make sure the accuracy of the news that you publish. As millions of people around the world read this magazine and they may come to certain conclusions by referring to your magazine. Therefore, it is highly important to publish only accurate information with supporting evidence. I’m not going to take any legal action against the magazine, though I can easily win, as this was the first time it happened. However, I urge you to correct the reported news in the next edition of the magazine with your apology. However, if you did not do so, I may have to look forward to taking the legal action.
Dear Sir or Madam,

With reference to the Times travel
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magazine
issued on 31st July 2019,
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#039; d like
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to emphasis
the false
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information
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given
in one of the articles in the
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magazine
.
In particular
, that article stated that the murder incident happened in Colombo 7, where
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I&
#039; m living.
However
, which is false
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information
as there was no such incident reported in my town in the recent past. I believe that someone has
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given
such false
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information
to the editor of the
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magazine
either by mistake or
deliberately
to spoil the repute of my town.

Therefore
, I urge the editor of the
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magazine
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the corrective measures and actions to rectify news.

As this is one of the world-
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famous
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magazines
all over the world, it is your responsibility to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure the accuracy of the news that you publish. As millions of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
around the world read this
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
magazine and
they may
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come
to certain conclusions by referring to your
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magazine
.
Therefore
, it is
highly
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important
to publish
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
accurate
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information
with supporting evidence.

I’m not going to take any legal action against the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
magazine
, though I can
easily
win, as this was the
first
time it happened.
However
, I urge you to correct the reported news in the
next
edition of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
magazine
with your apology.
However
, if you did not do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, I may
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
look forward to taking the legal action.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter You have read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter- Correct the information in the article- Explain why it is import v. 2

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
237 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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